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May 15, 2010 11:05

TITLE: Hide Behind Your Eyes - Chapter Four
RATING: R
SUMMARY: It hurts all the time when you don’t answer my calls and don’t have the time to remember how it was.
FANDOM: Spanish Football (Ramos/Torres)
STATUS: In Progress (4/?)
PROMPT: #039 (Fly)
DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything. This story is a work of fiction and came from the deepest darkest corner ( Read more... )

fandom: football, fic: hide behind your eyes, fic: fanfiction

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berry_tallcake May 15 2010, 05:40:22 UTC
oh the pain, the pain ;__; all that restraint and struggle they put themselves in is... -sigh-

amazing as always, thank you for writing and hope to read the next piece soon :)♥

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You are every cardiologist's nightmare... go_for_it_kid May 15 2010, 09:12:02 UTC
With every chapter you just kill me... kill me, you hear me!!! arrrrggggg is like running up a hill exhilarated by the high and then just... NOTHING! just hanging in space, not detained by gravity anymore, just FLOATING! ...waiting to read your new chapter for a new high... So, until then, i'll be here... just floating in space...
ps: I loved it, I love your writing, nando's stubbornness makes me wanna strangle myself and Sergio's hopelessness tears my heart up...
ps2: KEEP IT COMING!!

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agarina_bloom May 15 2010, 13:24:57 UTC
Stupid boys, stop fighting yourselves! This was so good, update soon please:)

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titania_torres May 15 2010, 17:29:16 UTC
oh their struggle is just beautiful and achingly so.
the last line just kills me =(
can't wait for more

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influira May 17 2010, 02:26:50 UTC
god, i love this.

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