ALjsfllsfl;sjlfs somehow, I got talked into doing the One Hour Porn Writing Festiviganza. First draft - completely unedited and read over. Also, doesn't have any porn (I KNOW. IT'S A PORN CHALLENGE *FAILS COMPLETELY*) READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. I'll probably rewrite this later. XD
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Even if she said 1 hour you could have kept going ( near hysterics )
( glomps you )
YOU ARE WIN XD
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(i'll try and finish it when i have time? XD)
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“Hey!” Maru said, offended. “We’re not all sluts!”
Honey, it's alright. Girls like it. <3
Oh oh and ahahah
“I hate everything,” Yamapi said with feeling.
jshfdshf!!! ♥
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ME TOO. lol yours was still way better arranged lol I need to practice these challenges XDD
..Hey I really like that last line "with feeling" :P
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ALjdhldlsldhld i have a habit of spontaneously starting random things and writing furiously, so i'm... sort of used to it? except when i do this with mer, i tend to have a whole lot more time to make it decent. and finish it too XD;;
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XD Really, though, if you got it wrong, I can't tell. And it was highly amusing to see Yamapi suffer like this. I particularly like the very beginning and the very end.
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(still have to rewrite the whole thing, one day XD)
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