[vaguely sauntering down to akamepi?] completely obvious

Jan 30, 2008 14:12

ALjsfllsfl;sjlfs somehow, I got talked into doing the One Hour Porn Writing Festiviganza. First draft - completely unedited and read over. Also, doesn't have any porn (I KNOW. IT'S A PORN CHALLENGE *FAILS COMPLETELY*) READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. I'll probably rewrite this later. XD

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yamapi/jin/kame, fic, je

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sanctified_x January 30 2008, 04:27:45 UTC
You. YOU. Anita why did you stopppppppppppppppppppppppppp.
Even if she said 1 hour you could have kept going ( near hysterics )

( glomps you )

YOU ARE WIN XD

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wintersjuly January 30 2008, 05:55:42 UTC
sljalfalalda well i have to abide by the rules! :OOOO

(i'll try and finish it when i have time? XD)

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goldengutgirl January 30 2008, 04:36:40 UTC
You wrote this in an hour?? I'd like to camp in your brain please XDD

“Hey!” Maru said, offended. “We’re not all sluts!”
Honey, it's alright. Girls like it. <3

Oh oh and ahahah

“I hate everything,” Yamapi said with feeling.

jshfdshf!!! ♥

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wintersjuly January 30 2008, 07:42:15 UTC
ALhjsdlslgslgfs maybe i should fic less when i'm hungover. i swear to god i don't even know what i was leading up too XDDDD

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goldengutgirl January 30 2008, 11:52:41 UTC
Wait what are you hungover from? XD

ME TOO. lol yours was still way better arranged lol I need to practice these challenges XDD

..Hey I really like that last line "with feeling" :P

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wintersjuly January 30 2008, 12:21:03 UTC
nothing special, just went to a pub for trivia night yesterday. lost miserably, of course (LAjdlgdlgs damned seinfeld questions LAJlsgjl) XDDD

ALjdhldlsldhld i have a habit of spontaneously starting random things and writing furiously, so i'm... sort of used to it? except when i do this with mer, i tend to have a whole lot more time to make it decent. and finish it too XD;;

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pashoshi January 30 2008, 04:46:21 UTC
...okay.

XD Really, though, if you got it wrong, I can't tell. And it was highly amusing to see Yamapi suffer like this. I particularly like the very beginning and the very end.

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wintersjuly January 30 2008, 07:46:42 UTC
ALjslslslfsls well. i'm glad you thought pi's pain was funny XDDDD

(still have to rewrite the whole thing, one day XD)

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thawrecka January 30 2008, 05:16:56 UTC
Aw, this is cute.

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wintersjuly January 30 2008, 05:27:52 UTC
ee, thank you ♥

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saturnianlove January 30 2008, 05:47:24 UTC
Just take Kame out of this equation and I bet it will be easier to finish. *beams*

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wintersjuly January 30 2008, 07:39:29 UTC
Alhgklslsafalss well pin is always easier to write for me XDDDD

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