Leave it up to the Rain (SuG Takeru)

[winterliar]

Title: Leave it up to the Rain

Author: Kaexel [ winterliar  ]
Chapter/s: 1/1
Genre: Romance, General, Het
Warnings: Het
Rating: PG (just to be sure)
Pairing/s: TakeruxOFC
Characters: SuG, OFC
Disclaimer: I don't own SuG. Only the story & the ofc is mine..

Chapter Summary: Next time, try leaving it up to the rain.

Rainy days...

He loves rainy days. It was one when

Comments

[fffriction1984]

This is sweetly written, but wayyyyy too short. ^^ I'm not even a SuG fan and I have no clue how those guys look, except for Takeru, but you really wrote this in a cute way. Maybe you should just try to get deeper into the plot before just ending the fic before it really began. ^^

[winterliar]

^^
I'll certainly keep that in mind!
Thank you!

[samuraisongbird]

I've actually meant to comment earlier, but you know how real life is. :3 But that's beside the point!

First, a bit of bad news. I do see a few minor mistakes here and there, but they can be overlooked a little. The second is the fic being way too short. It could've been longer I think.

And now for the good news. I'm not much into fics that are 95% dialogue or SuG in general for that matter, but this is really sweet. I've really felt something very sentimental in my heart while reading it. :)

I hope I don't sound mean here. ^^;

[winterliar]

No,you don't sound mean..^^

haha..I know this could've been better if I didn't rush it.I just really wanted to write something for the sake of writing..^^ But I'll try to do a whole lot better next time..

Thank you!