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[winterhorse]

Title: Complications
Fandom: Gravitation
Author: Raserei Hojo
Rating: PG-13
Words: 1,058
Summary: Some people can't take a dose of their own medicine
Note: Oneshot!
Prompt: Eiri decides to turn the tables on Tohma and interferes constantly with his life.

Comments

[ederyn]

Hee! Poor Eiri-san! I don't know what he's thinking; there are worse things than being stuck spending the night with Tohma. He should be grateful Mika didn't order Tohma out of the house while she spent the night with Eiri. Heh. Awesome fic! *loves and loves it*

[winterhorse]

I felt bad because I procrastinated all this time. Seriously, I wrote it today in 40 minutes because I was all, "Ahhh the deadline is in two days!"

So I'm relieved you don't think it's horrible;;

[glenavera]

Lovely story! Eiri thinks he's so incredible clever and then everything backfires and he's more or less at the same point from where he started *lol* Poor Eiri-san.

Great job!

[winterhorse]

Yup!

I'm sorry it wasn't a little longer and repetitive like the prompt suggested, though.

[glenavera]

Don't worry. It's great the way it is now. No need to change anything. As for your prompt... I really need to start on this one *whistles innocently*

[halcyonism]

But I gave it to you like two weeks ago!

[isparkle4meandu]

OOH! That was EVIL!

I loves it lots! Heeheehee!

I'm LOVING this challenge!

Ryuichi