phinnia: avalanche (rocks fall, jack dies) (ten/jack, nc-17)

[phinnia]

title: avalanche (rocks fall, Jack dies)
author: phinnia
pairing: tenth doctor/jack
spoilers: set post CoE
rating: nc-17
challenge: death
disclaimer: a wandering minstrel i, a thing of shreds and patches. i own nothing.
author's note: I thought I'd play with sequencing/linear timey-wimey-wimeyness in this a bit. I hope it turns out OK. <3

Comments

[dshael]

Lovely. Will read again. ;)

[phinnia]

eee, thank you! <3 <3

[silvermoon07]

Oh, wow! This was absolutely brilliant! So sad and so beautiful and so poignant all at once! I loved how your End of time fix it, with Jack entering that radiation chamber to save Wilf, effectively saving Ten as well, that was just fantastic! Now he and Ten can travel in the TARDIS forever and always.

It was so beautiful how they first had sex together. Ten asking Jack to have sex with him, and Jack, as always, taking such good care of his Ten, making him lose control in his ecstasy, speaking those lovely Gallifreyan words. Simply gorgeous!

Poor Jack, dying in his Ten's arms again, that part was so completely sad, and poor Ten sobbing over Jack's body, and his relief when he finally revived again. Their sweet words they exchanged made everything so much better, and Jack asking Ten to take them home, back to the TARDIS again, that was a beautiful ending.

You did a magnificent job with the prompt, and it was so wonderfully written. I loved this so much, and I've saved it to my memories. Thanks again.

[phinnia]

you leave such lovely comments. <3 thank you so much! <3

[beachy_geek]

I just am swooning with love for this. The romance of Jack and the Doctor comes through, the love and respect that they share as only they can.

I'm showing my age here, but this was just Dreamy! And now I will re-read it.

[phinnia]

thank you so much! <3<3

[sahiya]

GUH.

I.

Nngh.

GUH.

[phinnia]

*pats*
<3 <3 <3 <3
:)

[scifiangel]

So sad, touching, and so beautiful. The sex scene was hot too.

[phinnia]

thank you! <3