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teamharkness March 26 2011, 02:04:42 UTC
Oh, this made my heart ache for Jack. Well done.

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gigglinggigi April 11 2011, 04:07:31 UTC
Thank you love. I'm glad you liked it.

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wendymr March 26 2011, 03:03:29 UTC
I think you need to look at your rating again. This:

he'd nearly gotten sick when the salty taste of the last man's come filled his mouth.

is definitely not PG. I'd rate it as Mature/Adult/NSFW. Could you imagine reading that line and having a colleague walk behind you?

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gigglinggigi March 26 2011, 04:29:58 UTC
I am sorry it was suppose to be r at best. this is what happens when I try to do things while having to run out the door. Again I am sorry and will fix it. I hope it didn't offend you.

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dshael March 26 2011, 12:02:50 UTC
I really like what you're doing with this! Can't wait. :)

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gigglinggigi March 26 2011, 12:04:16 UTC
There should be more tomorrow. We'll see. I have to write at least another part before we post it. I'm writing now as we speak! Thank you for the comment!

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develish1 March 29 2011, 02:52:56 UTC
like where you're going with this, but that last line has me puzzled *runs off to read more*

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zclover March 30 2011, 03:11:23 UTC
OMG 10th DOCTOR SUPRISE ATTACK!!!!!!!!!

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zclover March 30 2011, 03:11:56 UTC
*surprise
meh, stupid keyboard...

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gigglinggigi March 30 2011, 03:12:55 UTC
Its okay.. you just made my night.

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gigglinggigi March 30 2011, 03:12:16 UTC
LOL!

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