Fic. My Mind is Set on You

[alicebluegown16]

Title: My Mind is Set on You
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Will hasn't had a decent night's sleep in thirty-three days. But who's counting, right?
Pairing/Characters: Will/Finn, Puck, mentions of Rachel, Sue, Brittany
AN: For the winn prompt meme: Will has insomnia and Finn is the only one who makes it better. This is a sequel to All in

Comments

[hopenight]

No lie. I'm kinda digging this fic series. I love how fucked up Will is. And you portrayed the guilt and the need so beautifully. Its just epic.

You portray insomnia well. Speaking as a recurring one, you really get to the bones of it. I do the Dick Clark thing even if I'm not in the throes of an episode too. Hahaha

Great job.

[tawg]

I like my fandom toys best when they're broken, and I think you've just about snapped Will in half (andit'sohsogooood). the insomnia was good, and it suits him, and the part with him snapping at Sue and her being taken aback by him breaking out of their little game, that was perfect. Puck worrying about him, too. Oh Will, you're wonderfully scary when you're not yourself.

I really like that Will is having this nice, neat, painful little breakdown at the end. He always struck me as a character that throws himself into everything 100%, so faking and pretending and just getting by would drive him crazy. As always, I can't wait to see what happens next.

[anonymous]

i love everything about this series, omg <3
i would go non-anon but i don't have an lj. but seriously, this is so amazing. will's angst, oh god i can barely take it. they have to end up together and he needs to be happy or else i will forever swim in the pits of why? because seriously, omg. he's so sad and finn is so... so... everything he wants and needs and and can i just say how perfect this, how you throw in tidbits of what they would be like together and then will goes back to reality and he's just sad and it makes me sad and i just want to shove finn and him in a room together.

with a bed. and possibly tissues incase someone gets angsty up in that.

please please please continue, love your anon biggest fan <3

[chocolate_inyx]

=( Poor Will. The descriptions were vivid and amazing. Great job.

[imlovinslash]

OMIGOD !!
This is was great !!
Will and Finn's imaginary sex sceen was beast !
Can't wait to read the rest !!