Fic: This Is The Thing (1/?)

[momoda6]

Title: This Is The Thing (1/?)
Author: momoda6  
Pairings/Characters: Will/Finn, Finn/Rachel, others later.
Rating: PG this part, may go up later.
Spoilers: All of season 1, takes place in the gap between season 1 and 2.
Summary: In which Will's inner voice abuses run-on sentences, a hug is more than a hug and Will feels nothing.
Author's Notes: This is my

Comments

[madmenfanatic]

It feels like it has been sooo long since someone has posted a Winnners fic so THANK YOU THANK YOU.

And I always enjoy reading Will's thought process (it's wrong, Finn is a student, I am not gay, oh and neither is Finn), probably because it makes the potential relationship more realistic.

You certainly could have ended this fic at the end of chapter 1 (kind of an unrequited crush), but I am sooooo happy you are going to continue. I need a Winn relationship. To live. And I am not exaggerating.

I am feeling faint again. Time for you to get working on Chapter 2! :)

PS misc stuff: loved your smiley face icon, hadn't occurred to me to draw one that way, sad for Will that he had to duck into another room because he couldn't handle Finn hugging Rachel the same way he hugged Will, and finally, I don't think any of us on this site mind if you move the rating higher... I'm just saying.

Thanks for writing.

[momoda6]

<3 Thanks for the comment. Ever since I posted this I've been sitting here biting my nails wondering what was going to happen and what people would think. I had to tell myself that realistically, people aren't going to comment 10 seconds after I post it, but you were pretty fast still. xD So yay.

This is definitely going to have a few more chapters. I don't have it mapped out yet, but I have a rough plot. (By rough I mean... if I wrote my plan out, it'd be about a sentence long...) You could probably get an idea where it's going from the fact that it's set between seasons 1 and 2 and from the song I linked to.

As for the rating... maybe. xD I don't know if I'll be able to write explicit sex or anything, but that's not to say they won't have sex. Just that I might not describe it in detail. >.> I have a feeling I'd make it very medical and unsexy because I'd get selfconscious about writing it.

Anyway, thanks again. <3 I'll try and do some of part 2 tonight/tomorrow, so hopefully it'll be up this week at least.

[suchsights]

Loved it! I too am VERY happy that you're going to be continuing this. Thanks!

[momoda6]

Thankyou so much. <3

[tawg]

Finn might pick Will up to embarrass him because he's taller and stronger than he is.
That image is adorable.

I really liked Will being in denial. It was cute, and also true to his character. I think that after the year he's been through, he'd probably just like someone to take care of him for a while, and I also think that Finn probably gives amazing hugs.

This fic was really sweet, and a little dorky, and so very in character for Will. You should totally write more. Like, ASAP.

[momoda6]

Thanks. :3

I think it's becoming second nature for Will to ignore his feelings by now. Because other than Terri, there's Emma and Finn, where absolutely nothing can/could have happened, so he has to act like he doesn't like them like that. It's got to suck, but I think it's his nature to put other people before himself most of the time, which is why he's trying to be happy for Finn and Rachel.

And thankyou, I'll try to make more dorky and adorableness. :P

[aeryth_soul]

I'm loving this!!! I think you got Will's voice really well, he is always denying things because he's a little stubborn! And Finn's hugs must be awesome!
Also Finn and Rachel are dating. Against all odds, Rachel Berry snagged the quarterback this, aside for the fic thing, this is something that will aways bugs me in Glee, one day she's all 'OMG Jesse is my ~true one~" then he turns into a bich and dumps her and then she's "OMG Finn I Love YOUUU" blah so lame. lol *ends ranting*
Hope you post more soon!!!!
XD
*needs a Glee icon*