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[dark_dreymer]

Title: 10 Items Or Less
Author: Dark-Dreymer
Pairing: Will/Finn
Prompt: Will and Finn running into Emma at the grocery store. Will doing his best to make sure she doesn't spot the condoms and lube in the basket, and Emma pretending she doesn't notice.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Inappropriate suggestions involving pineapple. Inappropriate activity involving

Comments

[tawg]

I must say that, as a check out chick myself, this story brought back some fun memories. Of course, the person on checkout is never quite as embarrassed as the person doing the buying - not after the three unnecessary price checks, at least :D

I liked these two being insatiable in the bedroom. Because, in all honesty, they are two hot men and hard porn of them is surprisingly hard to find. What's with that? Anyway, you gave them a very cute relationship dynamic - I lived Will threatening to put Finn in detention - and I loved how painfully awkward Will was with Emma. It was great.

[dark_dreymer]

I don't get embarassed buying condoms and lube, I mean; they're products as much as anything else you buy so what's with the tabboo?

hard porn of them is surprisingly hard to find. What's with that? Maybe it's the dynamic of the relationship, the teacher/student thing makes it a little... off, somehow. Which I don't get either. Okay, let's add mattress pounding PWP to my to-write list.

[tawg]

Discount condoms always come with a bit of shame, and then there are people who do what Will did in this fic and try to hide the condoms under a packet of biscuits. If I see that someone is embarrassed about their purchase, I'm going to run with it.

Maybe it's the past fandoms I've been in, but Will/Finn really isn't that wrong. I mean, even finding fic that casts their relationship as wrong and nasty is kind of hard to find. I can see why they're such a cute, sweet couple, and why people love reading and writing about them in that way, but I'm kind of used to fandom breaking nice things too...

[dark_dreymer]

I had a friend who went shopping for her sister and all she was supposed to buy was sausages and tampons, but then she spent like an extra ten pounds trying to make it look like she was buying more than that XD

My big epic Winn fic is for a prompt where their relationship is discovered and they try to stay together through all the negative ramifications, so hopefully that'll satisfy your desire for less wholesome fic :)

... I just need to finish the damn thing *headdesk*

[darkwords_ifind]

mmm pineapple and popsicles sound so good right now ;)

me gusta mucho, it made my night thanks!!

[dark_dreymer]

mmm pineapple and popsicles sound so good right now ;) Ha, yeah. I think I was projecting with the pineapple, there's nothing better than freshly sliced pineapple =D

[dark_dreymer]

Hm, I guess that could be why...

Ah well, this is what the prompt meme exists for!

[its_davy_baby]

Hot damn, that makes me want to have a popsicle sooo badly now. Also loved about the pineapple rings.

In Portland, Oregon they have a doughnut shop and on a certain late night weekend once a year, they have a "Doughnut stacking competition" for guys. I've yet to attend one, but it would be very interesting. LOL!

[dark_dreymer]

Also loved about the pineapple rings. I've been reading a lot of Psych fic recently, I blame that for perverting pineapples for me :P

[momoda6]

I have to say, a small part of me is dissapointed that they didn't end up using sausages and pineapples. But maybe that's because I read a fill of my Finn/Puck/Cucumber prompt earlier

[momoda6]

Oh my god, I think this is my longest comment ever. Shit.

[dark_dreymer]

Seriously though, there is nothing I love more than getting long feedback on my fic. So, muchos, muchos thankies ^__^

[dark_dreymer]

a small part of me is dissapointed that they didn't end up using sausages and pineapples. Drop a prompt on the meme and I'll see what my muse and I can wrangle :P

Your ramble pretty much summed up what I wanted to say but couldn't quite think how to say. Winn is made for fluff :)