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[dark_dreymer]

Title: 10 Items Or Less
Author: Dark-Dreymer
Pairing: Will/Finn
Prompt: Will and Finn running into Emma at the grocery store. Will doing his best to make sure she doesn't spot the condoms and lube in the basket, and Emma pretending she doesn't notice.
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Inappropriate suggestions involving pineapple. Inappropriate activity involving

Comments

[tawg]

I must say that, as a check out chick myself, this story brought back some fun memories. Of course, the person on checkout is never quite as embarrassed as the person doing the buying - not after the three unnecessary price checks, at least :D

I liked these two being insatiable in the bedroom. Because, in all honesty, they are two hot men and hard porn of them is surprisingly hard to find. What's with that? Anyway, you gave them a very cute relationship dynamic - I lived Will threatening to put Finn in detention - and I loved how painfully awkward Will was with Emma. It was great.

[dark_dreymer]

I don't get embarassed buying condoms and lube, I mean; they're products as much as anything else you buy so what's with the tabboo?

hard porn of them is surprisingly hard to find. What's with that? Maybe it's the dynamic of the relationship, the teacher/student thing makes it a little... off, somehow. Which I don't get either. Okay, let's add mattress pounding PWP to my to-write list.

[tawg]

Discount condoms always come with a bit of shame, and then there are people who do what Will did in this fic and try to hide the condoms under a packet of biscuits. If I see that someone is embarrassed about their purchase, I'm going to run with it.

Maybe it's the past fandoms I've been in, but Will/Finn really isn't that wrong. I mean, even finding fic that casts their relationship as wrong and nasty is kind of hard to find. I can see why they're such a cute, sweet couple, and why people love reading and writing about them in that way, but I'm kind of used to fandom breaking nice things too...

[dark_dreymer]

I had a friend who went shopping for her sister and all she was supposed to buy was sausages and tampons, but then she spent like an extra ten pounds trying to make it look like she was buying more than that XD

My big epic Winn fic is for a prompt where their relationship is discovered and they try to stay together through all the negative ramifications, so hopefully that'll satisfy your desire for less wholesome fic :)

... I just need to finish the damn thing *headdesk*

[tawg]

That prompt is an awesome looking one.

[dark_dreymer]

Would it also interest you to know that I'm on chapter 7 and at a 35K word count and I'm not even halfway done with the plot yet?

[tawg]

That's an epic haul. I envy you - I get to 12k and get distracted by shiny things and am never seen again. But it sounds like you have a good, meaty plot.

[dark_dreymer]

I get to 12k and get distracted by shiny things and am never seen again. I get like that with chapter fic, that's why I'm getting the whole thing written before I post it. I don't want to leave anyone hanging.

it sounds like you have a good, meaty plot. I'm basically covering roughly a year, starting with the discovery and then exploring the changes in both Will and Finn's life as they cope with the consequences and cling to the hope that they'll weather it together.

So yeah, plot. PLOT. PLOT So much plot *headdesk*

[tawg]

Don't hurt your head! You need that for the writings! It's nice to hear that you're looking at the 'what happens next' side of things. I love stories that lead up to an event, but I have one of those brains that instantly goes 'but then what?'. Which is why I write fic, really.

[dark_dreymer]

Don't hurt your head! It's okay, I have a pillow from its_davy_baby to protect me from headdesk-induced brain damage =D

I have one of those brains that instantly goes 'but then what?' I have a similar brain, which is how I end up writing prolonged chapter fic that never seems to end.

[tawg]

Great. Now I've got The Song that Never Ends stuck in my head.

[dark_dreymer]

Oh delightful, and you felt the need to palm it onto me. *sigh*

Oh well, I have a cure for that. *looks up 'Doncha' by the Pussycat Dolls* Ah, that's marginally better.

[tawg]

I'm worried that if I spam you much more, the borders for this post will break. Is it okay if I friend you?

[dark_dreymer]

More than okay :)