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Fic: Your Ass is mine Hudson

Mar 30, 2011 00:37

Title: Your ass is mine Hudson
Rating: G
Characters : Will Schuester, Finn Hudson. Mentions of Matt, Mike, Kurt, Puck and Artie.
Word Count: 940.
Summary: Finn introduces Will to the joys of X-box live and really wishes he hadn’t.
Notes: Ok i know how to do cuts now, yay, so i have no real reason not to post and i can completely edit my content and not ( Read more... )

fanwork: fanfic, contribution: second post, rating: pg

Comments 6

tawg March 30 2011, 00:45:48 UTC

Haha! This is a really great fic. You have a really good Finn voice, and the smaller things like Puck getting slaughtered by middle school kids and Kurt waring Finn about the thought/deed divide. You set up a lot of complex interactions for such a short fic. And it was hot.

And you don't have to worry about hating on ff.n here. We have whole communities for hating on it, like anti_ffdotnet.

dave2380 March 30 2011, 02:19:23 UTC

I don't actually hate hate ff.net, i just get really tired of having issues with my documents and stuff. But thanks for the comment, i'm actually quite happy with this one which is weird, cus usually i have all sorts of issues with my work. But it seemes to work out alright so yay.

psyko_kittie March 31 2011, 02:17:12 UTC

OMG! You so need to write more of this... a mini-sequel or something with Artie or Puck commenting on Will must being getting laid because he's never on anymore! Love this. :D

dave2380 March 31 2011, 11:29:26 UTC

I dunno it's always just felt like a one shot to me, i'm not saying i'll never do a follow up, i just need a really good jumping off point, to start from.

flupf March 31 2011, 22:03:55 UTC

this is awesome! i really enjoyed reading it (:
now i feel kinda nerdy for understanding all the talk about the red-ring-of-death... sadly my 360 had this and i had to buy a new one x)

dave2380 March 31 2011, 23:56:23 UTC

I know. My xbox did it to me too so i went for the lovely slimline one, i need to get my first one fixed though, i promised i'd donate it to my mum so she can replace our positively ancient dvd player. And just knowing about red ring of death doesn't make you nerdy, speaking fluent World of Warcraft on the other hand...... Dps ele shammy lfg icc10. Sometimes i feel there shoud be a translator for it lol.