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alectrona19 August 25 2016, 00:18:22 UTC
/BREATHES INTO A PAPER BAG/

I didn't expect this coming from my basic "minhoonyoon goes on a roadtrip" prompt!!! This is much more than my expectation, of course and thank you very much!!!!

Firstly I'm just amazed by your writing style - the plot build up is just so well-done that at the beginning I was puzzled by what's going on and was keen to know more about the world, their powers, 2Seung's back story, etc. It unravels beautifully! It keeps you interested and damn, I craved for more by the end of the fic!

Secondly THE CHARACTERS o<-< there isn't a lot of people who would think of Mino as more of the healing, support-kind of mutant (most would grant him the offensive fire breathing, ruthless god of death power) but the fact that you wrote him as a healer type is imo very fitting! Seunghoon too, who looks like he's concealing his power and not the show-off kind of guy but actually has a quite powerful ability of his own. SEUNGYOON THOUGH, behind his endless sleep and him being a little prick at the beginning of the story he's one ( ... )

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neurotikan August 25 2016, 13:18:57 UTC
Aaaahhhh!!!!! This is so good.

Seunghoon, the man with the warmest heart would totally be the one who'd fight to save others. Look at him taking grumpy yoon out of the facility. How Yoon despite disagreeing about Mino still followed and even helped. How they just communicated without words. How Hoon understood Yoon's attachment to his guitar. How Hoon took care of Yoon despite the latter being a stronger mutant. How do I thank you for these 2seung parts?

Minhoon! Argh!

And Kangnam! Man, Kangnam has turned into this rare ship and I just wanted to thank you for adding that bit. Yoon still trying to get through Taehyun inspite and despite of everything...my heart.

Thank you for writing such a good story. I immensely enjoyed myself.

BTW, the world needs a sequel of this. Please!

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ext_2279633 August 28 2016, 12:28:35 UTC
oh my god. I HAVE SO MANY FEELINGS I'M ;__; this was such, such an exciting read. awesome plot and amazing world and aaah minhoonyoon. each of them was so fascinating, I loved each of their characters and backstories ;; <33 squishes minhoon together these cutes ;; I loved them so much. but also my feelings for kangnam are just. JUST. akshsjd A LOT. THERE ARE A LOT OF THEM. I never expected Taehyun to be the telepath and theN HE WAS AND kangnam being the two strongest mutants and then the ending. THE ENDING. much feels. ;___;

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