I didn't expect this coming from my basic "minhoonyoon goes on a roadtrip" prompt!!! This is much more than my expectation, of course and thank you very much!!!!
Firstly I'm just amazed by your writing style - the plot build up is just so well-done that at the beginning I was puzzled by what's going on and was keen to know more about the world, their powers, 2Seung's back story, etc. It unravels beautifully! It keeps you interested and damn, I craved for more by the end of the fic!
Secondly THE CHARACTERS o<-< there isn't a lot of people who would think of Mino as more of the healing, support-kind of mutant (most would grant him the offensive fire breathing, ruthless god of death power) but the fact that you wrote him as a healer type is imo very fitting! Seunghoon too, who looks like he's concealing his power and not the show-off kind of guy but actually has a quite powerful ability of his own. SEUNGYOON THOUGH, behind his endless sleep and him being a little prick at the beginning of the story he's one of the strongest mutants, which I can echo completely as I personally view Seungyoon as the one who has a strong mentality irl with him being the leader and all, wHICH leads to my third point...
The relationships!!!! I love how even with Seungyoon's power you make 2seung to be inseparable bcs truthfully they need each other - Seunghoon as a loyal companion to Seungyoon who amidst his power, he really just needs someone to understand and look after him. With Minhoon too, how they can open up to each other despite their insecurities about themselves, finding out that they have similarities about feeling initially insecure about their abilities. The three of them together is just so /sobs/ weakening for me and again thanks a lot for beautifully sewing their relationships in this piece of work.
Lastly all the trivial but important stuffs to make the ambience like HAUTE THE CAR and that Kangnam ending (I'm all up for Mino's theory but Amber's is not bad at all, Kangnam could be gods at the parallel universe).
This has the quality and interestingness to be a series of fics or even novels and if this were to be adapted to a Hollywood movie there would be a lot of sequels and endless spin-offs where we'll have Seunghoon: Origins movie.
THANK YOU AGAIN I hope this comment serves you justice ;___;
(also, favorite line: "...he declares like it’s the most natural thing to say." This was so sweet as readers could feel the tipping point of minhoon 's relationship. (Okay I should stop myself now or else I won't be able to stop splurging my words out))
I didn't expect this coming from my basic "minhoonyoon goes on a roadtrip" prompt!!! This is much more than my expectation, of course and thank you very much!!!!
Firstly I'm just amazed by your writing style - the plot build up is just so well-done that at the beginning I was puzzled by what's going on and was keen to know more about the world, their powers, 2Seung's back story, etc. It unravels beautifully! It keeps you interested and damn, I craved for more by the end of the fic!
Secondly THE CHARACTERS o<-< there isn't a lot of people who would think of Mino as more of the healing, support-kind of mutant (most would grant him the offensive fire breathing, ruthless god of death power) but the fact that you wrote him as a healer type is imo very fitting! Seunghoon too, who looks like he's concealing his power and not the show-off kind of guy but actually has a quite powerful ability of his own. SEUNGYOON THOUGH, behind his endless sleep and him being a little prick at the beginning of the story he's one of the strongest mutants, which I can echo completely as I personally view Seungyoon as the one who has a strong mentality irl with him being the leader and all, wHICH leads to my third point...
The relationships!!!! I love how even with Seungyoon's power you make 2seung to be inseparable bcs truthfully they need each other - Seunghoon as a loyal companion to Seungyoon who amidst his power, he really just needs someone to understand and look after him. With Minhoon too, how they can open up to each other despite their insecurities about themselves, finding out that they have similarities about feeling initially insecure about their abilities. The three of them together is just so /sobs/ weakening for me and again thanks a lot for beautifully sewing their relationships in this piece of work.
Lastly all the trivial but important stuffs to make the ambience like HAUTE THE CAR and that Kangnam ending (I'm all up for Mino's theory but Amber's is not bad at all, Kangnam could be gods at the parallel universe).
This has the quality and interestingness to be a series of fics or even novels and if this were to be adapted to a Hollywood movie there would be a lot of sequels and endless spin-offs where we'll have Seunghoon: Origins movie.
THANK YOU AGAIN I hope this comment serves you justice ;___;
(also, favorite line: "...he declares like it’s the most natural thing to say." This was so sweet as readers could feel the tipping point of minhoon 's relationship. (Okay I should stop myself now or else I won't be able to stop splurging my words out))
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