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How's my spying?
Please comment here with questions, comments, and concerns regarding the way I portray Anthony.
Critique is more than welcome, but it is best if offered with examples of what I'm doing wrong and suggestions on how to improve. I may not always agree and/or take the advice, but it will all be noted.
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3rd Code - audio
How in God's name do you all stand this?
[Too many long nights spent able to do nothing more than read the Journals, which provide no insight to the Malnosso. Too many cups of coffee and glasses of Scotch and soda. Too many questions he can't find answers to ( Read more... ) -
2nd code - written / action
[Written]
Wings, material goods provided, no money, fairy tales, and now a falling moon with a face.
It feels like a child's bedtime story and a following nightmare.
This is absurd. All of it.
[ActionHe's not quite as settled and dismissive as the writing would imply. Not in the slightest ( Read more... ) -
1st Code - Written / Action
[Written]
I've found a bar, Good Spirits. All well and good. Grateful to see this place has that at least.
What I'm curious is-- What other forms of entertainment are there? What do you do all do here for fun?
[Never mind that he has a very specific idea of "fun." He won't be mentioning that just yet.]
[ActionBoth as he writes and a good while ( Read more... )
