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windscryer

Fort Knox Has Nothing on Poughkeepsie

Nov 17, 2009 05:08

Title: Fort Knox Has Nothing on Poughkeepsie
Rating: M for Dean's filthy, filthy mouth
Characters/Pairings: Sam and Dean, none
Warnings: pillow fights, disparagement of a beloved Disney Movie, language, brotherly schmoop, flahsbacks
Genres: Gen, Wee!chester, Fluff
Chapters: 1
Completed: Yes
Word count: 4699
Disclaimer: The boys are not mine, ( Read more... )

genre: fluff, character: supernatural: sam winchester, genre: gen, warnings: language, rating: m, category: one-shot, genre: wee!chester, fic: supernatural, character: supernatural: dean winchester, damn you lj-cut, fandom: supernatural

Comments 23

lifewaters November 17 2009, 19:56:20 UTC

*sends compliments via trebuchet because they rock harder than the average catapult* Hurray couch forts :D

windscryer December 5 2009, 14:49:33 UTC

*SNORFLE* I should not encourage the bad puns but... *EPFB* ROCK ON, SISTER.

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Oh hell. Now I've done it myself. *headdesk*

Thanks for the love!

king_styles November 18 2009, 06:04:20 UTC

LOL. Loved it.

windscryer December 5 2009, 14:49:54 UTC

:D Thanks!

tsuki_no_bara December 4 2009, 21:58:08 UTC

oh my god, so cute. i love wee!chesters. the boys' back-and-forth as adults is spot-on, i love the image of dean trying to bribe an eight-year-old with hair braiding to get her to watch die hard, and i especially love that he builds a pillow fort with sammy to distract himself as much as his brother.

windscryer December 5 2009, 14:53:26 UTC

Aren't those boys just adorable when they're tiny? :D

Not that they aren't adorable when they're ginormous too...

Thank you for the detailed feedback! I always love hearing the specific things I got right so I know to do them again next time.

(And I love the image of him trying to bribe with braiding so much, I might have to explore that idea a little further. ;D)

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windscryer December 5 2009, 14:56:03 UTC

Yay! Banter is always the part I'm most nervous about. And I was SO afraid the Lion King bits were going to come off as lame and cheezy-fo-sheezy, but obviously Lu was right and I was wrong about that. :D

I SO WANT TO SEE THEM BUILD A FORT IN THE SHOW. OMJ. THEY SHOULD GET CAS TO MAKE IT ANGELY SPESHUL AND RIDE OUT THE APOCALYPSE THERE!

Thanks for the love!

just_ruth December 5 2009, 02:44:37 UTC

Wonderful! It was a good laugh and a nice use of flashback. I really liked this.

windscryer December 5 2009, 14:56:46 UTC

Thanks! I wasn't sure the flashback would work, but it seems it did so YAY! \o/