ukiss ; only you

[singthistunes]

only you
alexander/kiseop ; pg ; 613w
the past tense of loving

ukiss fic challenge ; prompt 004. past tense

Comments

[s2_otter]

asdkekjrljthsf
this is so beautiful /types in small case like you
i really like the centre idea that this fic revolves around, the insecurities of a past love and knowing how strong it was when it existed.
isn't really touched on in fanfics, so thank you for this pretty fic <3

[singthistunes]

asdklejf thank you so much! ♥
I had a hard time writing it, so reading your comment makes me all warm inside ^^

again; thank you! ♥

[brandnewwind]

I must admit I will always judge and cringe a bit when I see a fic that is written without any capitalizations, and this time it wasn't different. But I decided to keep on because I miss reading Alseop. And I'm glad I did ♥

This fic is absolutely heart-warming ;_; I love it when there's a solid, complete story behind such a short text, and I love it even more when it's told this well in simple, quick words. The main idea of it is bittersweet and amazing by itself, and dfkghdkjsdfkj you did so well with it; it completely holds the entire drabble together, I'm rolling in the love here ♥
Also, your grasp on Kiseop's personality is really, really accurate! And you made him very easy for me to empathize with. Alexander's was a little bit more loose, in my opinion, that is, but I never mind someone going a bit OOC if that helps you tell a great story, which was decidedly the case.
Not to mention both of them are adorable ♥

I enjoyed it even with that little prejudice of mine. You're flawless :)

[singthistunes]

I normally don't write without the capitalizations, so I don't really understand why I did it. I'm glad you said something about it though, because that's just all the more reason for me to go back to my usual style!

Wow, your comment means a lot to me. To read that you actually got the main idea of the story makes me so happy, because sometimes I feel like I'm just writing something that doesn't make sense.
Oh dear, the personalities. I never wrote Alexander before, so I had a lot of problems with that. Next time I'm going to work on that! ;)

Thank you so much for reading and thank you for the lovely comment ♥

[rilakkiseop]

ohmygod ;___; <3

You just feel so bad for Kiseop because you can feel his doubt and lack of confidence in himself because he fears he won't be someone Xander loves as much as he loved Kevin. And it's true that he won't ever be but then their relationship could be better than what Alexander had before but who knows what could be in store for them.

This is really deep and you did a great job <3

[singthistunes]

;_______;

I wanted to write something a little deeper, so I'm glad it worked out. And I'm glad you noticed those details and just...yeah, your comment made me smile real wide ♥

thank you ♥