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singthistunes in windowofmyheart

beast ; five minutes to midnight

May 22, 2011 16:56

five minutes to midnight
doojoon/junhyung ; pg ; 572w
he's waiting for midnight to come

( he doesn't get an answer and he wonders if he's dreaming )

p: doojoon/junhyung, r: pg, f: beast

Comments 25

maxism12 May 22 2011, 15:02:19 UTC

Mine♥

singthistunes May 22 2011, 15:03:07 UTC

wow, you're fast.

maxism12 May 22 2011, 15:10:35 UTC

Oh Oh Oh Only for you ♥

singthistunes May 22 2011, 15:22:11 UTC

Let's make that our theme song, okay? ^^

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junpops May 22 2011, 15:47:42 UTC

QAQ i liked this omg!!! short but sweet, and the title works really well with the plot ♥

idk but i love the dialogue and the entire format basically, with simple words and unspoken feelings that leave behind this dull ache... idk what i'm saying anymore

♥♥♥ for the painful reality that they can't be together, instead they work things out in their own way somehow (+ for hinted smut coughs) even though it sounds like things aren't going to get much better for them :(((

but thank you for writing this and i hope you continue to write more of them hehe ♥♥♥

singthistunes May 24 2011, 08:44:55 UTC

thank you :) yeah, I got inspired by the title ^^

it's what I aimed for; some unspoken feelings hidden behind the whole story.

I'm so glad you got the story, since I was worried it wasn't obvious enough (and yes, hinted smut since I can't write real smut XD). idk, maybe if I'm going to write more of this, things will get better for them. I have this idea in mind, so hopefully it will work out ^^

thank you for reading! ♥

shippers_love21 May 22 2011, 15:56:28 UTC

So doojoon is married with a baby?and the girl knew junhyung as doojoon's lover?

singthistunes May 24 2011, 08:46:11 UTC

I don't know if he's married. but he has a baby and lives with the girl, yes. And she does know about them, but the story is just complicated like that.

vennarashii May 22 2011, 16:05:31 UTC

whoa. that was good. great ♥
and to tell you the truth i saw the girl, but not the baby. lol :D

singthistunes May 24 2011, 08:47:51 UTC

thank you! ♥
the baby just popped in there XD at first it was just the girl, but then it didn't make sense to me, since he could've just left the girl. So I had to make a reason for Doojoon to stay with the girl, and there's where the baby comes in ;)

countrymir May 22 2011, 22:26:24 UTC

well this was just lovely. the plot is shown but there isn't enough to give it all away. i do hope you'll write a bit more of this au

singthistunes May 24 2011, 08:48:44 UTC

aww, thank you! that's exactly what I was aiming for :) I'll try, since I have an idea in my head ^^