NEW! "The Hand That Feeds - Part Three" (ATWT/Nuke/Angels Lie)

[willwork4dean]

Title: The Hand That Feeds - Part Three

What It Is: Oneshot/Songfic/"Angels Lie" 'verse

Rating: R for language, content

Prompt: Still another sequel to “Angels Lie”!

Disclaimer: Don’t own ‘em. Don’t make no money.

Warning GIANT FUCKING WARNING! PLEASE READ!

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Comments

[newhaven183]

Excellent installment. Wow.

[willwork4dean]

Thanks - glad you enjoyed it!

[cindyls1969]

God. Jesus fucking Christ. I just want to take them both and hide them away forever. Let them snuggle each other and keep them safe from all the monsters.

[willwork4dean]

Don't worry - there will be snuggling aplenty! (Eventually.)

[cindyls1969]

Sigh, still waiting for the aforementioned comfort and snuggling.

[karen_jk]

Very dramatic and powerful. Trust that f----er to use Luke to make Noah submit.

[willwork4dean]

Luke is Noah's Achilles heel. Not in a bad way, of course! But it does leave Noah open to manipulation, especially when he's backed into a corner. (Literally, in this case.)

[jeri_1116]

Unless one of the boys is dying I don't care for warnings but like that you put them there for others.

Through this whole chapter I kept going back to your warning alert. I was like "well, fuck! When is shit gonna hit the fan?"

As soon as Noah woke up and Jimmy appeared I knew what was gonna happen. And I gotta say I thought it was gonna be worse. Don't get me wrong, it was bad, but I thought rape. At least Noah in a way had a choice. Wasn't the best sitiuation- not by a long short but at least there wasn't any screaming involed.

Oh my poor BB. He needs hugs and kisses,hot chocolate and cinnamon sticks, big warm blankets, oatmeal raisen cookies and blow jobs from Luke until further notice. Please help my booboo.

Great Chapter! Sad as fuck, but awesome nevertheless.

[willwork4dean]

Yeah, I'm not a big fan of warnings - they kill the supense for me. But there have been several big discussions about them,and the general consensus is it's better to do them and give readers fair warning. I write to entertain - the last thing I want to do is upset people.

And I gotta say I thought it was gonna be worse. Don't get me wrong, it was bad, but I thought rape.

Technically, it still is, at least in my opinion. But I get what you mean.

Oh my poor BB. He needs hugs and kisses,hot chocolate and cinnamon sticks, big warm blankets, oatmeal raisen cookies and blow jobs from Luke until further notice. Please help my booboo.

LOL! I promise the comfort part of the story is coming, so I'll try to work all that in.

Great Chapter! Sad as fuck, but awesome nevertheless.

That's pretty much what I was going for, so I'm glad it worked for you! :-)

[karen_jk]

It IS rape. Blackmail doesn't turn rape into something else.

[willwork4dean]

I agree.

[karen_jk]

I read the whole story on and off over the last 24 hrs and I'm glad I did because now this chapter means so much more.

You are putting your readers through the ringer but man, do you do it well.

[willwork4dean]

I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment. Comments are crack for writers. :-)