I like the idea of just having the characters tell their stories rather than full-fledged flashbacks chapters. If this were being into a movie those descriptive sections could still easily be flashbacks. Sometimes that shift back and forth can be jarring... it works a bit better if the location stays the same, but if they're switching time and location then it can get harder to follow.
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Here's the collage. The main characters appear several times, the others one time each (and I've cast GM as twins).
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