TF: Directionless

[wildernesstales]

Rating: PG-13
Series: Movieverse
Pairings: Ironhide/Sideswipe
Summary: Once the war ends, what are warriors to do?
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: As per usual, the good things in life are not mine to have, but belong to someone else... in this case Hasbro, Takara and IDW and anyone else I’ve forgotten…
Authors Notes: For the tf_rare_pairing  June Challenge prompt - No

Comments

[ayngelcat]

Well - its a sort of sparring!! Like it XD

[wildernesstales]

Thank you.

[niyazi_a]

It's hard to tell--maybe I need more tea--who says "This is not sparring." I gather it's Ironhide but my brain stuttered over that, because you don't block-paragraph so it's impossible to tell if that's a continuation of the previous paragraph OR an entirely new paragraph. Maybe you could space between paragraphs? It would visually clarify your paragraphing. (Maybe you do and it's just the style of the fic comm that eats it?)
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[wildernesstales]

I thought I'd made that clear, but obviously not. Thank you for pointing it out. I'll try and work on it next time I write.