ocean sequence: running on my mind boy, forrest gump (3/3)

[wildefiree]

Comments

[arisian]

I've read the three parts you have posted all in one go and it's left me breathless. I love the repeated imagery and metaphors, the way the five of them orbit each other- it reminds me of Virgina Woolf a bit, the way each is part of the other, part of the water and the music of life more than individual selves and how the repeated thoughts and ideas run seamlessly through each of them as though they're all on some greater wavelength (how liam and zayn both know without speaking that zayn is created from liam and not the reverse, how harry is titanium, louis's villain's chin, niall as the light that spreads into dark places

[wildefiree]

thank you SO much for this comment. it's...wow, thank you so much. AND WOW VIRGINIA WOOLF ARE YOU KIDDING ME. but really, just thank you so much

[joyeuxetoile]

just speechless, this is so beautiful and haunting. you're writing is amazing, i'm positively enthralled with this verse. XX

[wildefiree]

thank you SO much darling for reading and leaving a comment. you're amazing and i hope you like the rest of the sequence xx

[wildefiree]

thank you!! you're lovely for reading and leaving this comment!! thank you, doll :)))

[dorovna]

those last bits, oh my god.
i repeatedly sighed and cried and gazed at the ceiling in agony while reading this. i don't ever want it to end. ever. when i read the first part of this sequence, i told myself i'd keep it in a hole in my heart and read it again once in a while, so i wouldn't get tired of it. then i read the second part, and i put that in my heart too. then this. by the time the last two parts come out, there won't be anything but this ocean in my heart.
this is just phenomenal.

[wildefiree]

omg thank youuuuu i get really emotional writing this too and I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M GOING TO DO ONCE I WRITE THE ENDING EITHER! but thank you so much for keeping this in your heart and i'm so glad that you've enjoyed this sequence.

harry's part will be coming out next and i would hope he finds a place in your heart as well :))

[chriss0123]

Oh my GOD, the love I feel for the way you write is infinite, it's so perfect and so heartfelt and it goes straight through my little heart. I love the relationship between Harry and Zayn,and my secret is that I kind of wanted them to end up together,even if I knew it was impossible.
“there is another world, harry, but it’s inside this one. we are fated, i think - but never destined.” killed meeeh.
Like always, I'm waiting for the next part (which I'm sure I'm going to love the most,since it's all about Harry and your Harry is the thing I love the most about this story).I wish I could describe what I feel right now,but I just can't. Oh,btw, can you recommend some authors that you like? I have a feeling that we may have the same preference for authors, and I've run out of things to read,so pretty please :]

[wildefiree]

harry and zayn are so tragic and writing them as a pair is really such a pleasure. i feel like they both understand each other so well but there was never a chance that a love born from such despair could really wind up together.

the next part is harry indeed! and he's SUCH a little minx to write about!

as for authors that i love i can recommend: love-wilts, dangerbears, transgenicveins, borogroves, harriet_vane, theviolonist...(most are on livejournal but some double on ao3). you can go through my friendslist because i've friended almost all of the authors that i love!