Comments | wildefiree: ocean sequence: running on my mind boy, forrest gump (3/3)

wildefiree

ocean sequence: running on my mind boy, forrest gump (3/3)

Jan 15, 2013 04:34

( zayn might believe in a lot of things like soulmates and fate and destiny and prayer and creation, but he still won’t believe in heaven because: )

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shescardinal January 16 2013, 05:23:24 UTC

jesus.

i don't know what to say.

except your words... are perfection. "‘my body is a dead language and you pronounce each word perfectly’." - amazing. it feels wrong to quote any lines... because they are all so well placed and well versed and poetic and i just. !!!!!!!!

wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:23:53 UTC

thank you so much for being patient with this part and for leaving this comment. i'm so grateful and flattered!! i'm glad that you've liked the sequence and idk what to say i'm flustered!! thank you thank you :)))

wechasethestars January 16 2013, 07:45:21 UTC

this is just incredible, i'm just sitting here shaking my head in awe, i am so in love with your writing voice

wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:24:47 UTC

and i'm in love with you. thank you so much for giving this sequence a chance and for leaving this comment. i'm grateful for your audience xx

retinaldamage January 16 2013, 08:26:28 UTC

phenomenal.

wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:35:24 UTC

thank you so much for reading. you are wonderful and phantasmal :)

elisewin16 January 16 2013, 09:40:18 UTC

I think I've never commented your fics so here I am haha
I was waiting so badly for this part and it was definitely worth the wait! Your writing is so original and I never thought Bible's quotes could fit in a 1d fic, but it flows and... wow, well I suck with comments.
I'm glad that Zayn and Liam managed to find each other again, I remember how I felt when I finished reading the first part this summer and for some reason I thought there was no hope for them!? so yeah. I guess that's it, thank you for this amazing fic and looking forward to the next part ♥

wildefiree January 19 2013, 04:24:43 UTC

thank you SO much darling for leaving this comment! and I'm so sorry for the wait but i'm glad that you've found it enjoyable. and thank you for the bible verse compliment too because i wasn't sure if i could do a good job explaining and fitting it in, so thank you!

and the resolution is definitely a long time coming. this is the calm after but they'll definitely still need to work out their issues a bit. and the next part shall be harry's! hope you enjoy!

artemistory January 16 2013, 09:54:49 UTC

I need to learn how to breathe properly..... WORTH THE WEEKS AND MONTHS OF WAITING. My tears are still fresh. The way you write, when you associate it with colors, religion, song lyrics and the galaxy all aligned with an actual theme. Your words are beautiful. GOSH. Can I get your autograph? This is so moving. How incredibly happy I am at the eleventh year but does this end the ziam side of the story? We still have two more parts right?

I love you so much. Never ever EVER stop writing......

And thank you. Thank you for existing and owning that smart brain of yours. Thank you for this. Just. Thank you. *hugs*

wildefiree January 19 2013, 04:33:37 UTC

thank you so much! i'm sorry for keeping you waiting for so long but i'm glad you've enjoyed it! and i'm glad that you've found the themes fitting and all of its accompaniments enjoying!

there will definitely be more ziam in the remaining parts of the story (harry then niall) but they kind of echo in the background instead of taking center stage.

thank YOU for leaving this comment and thank you for reading :))