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drivetothestars January 15 2013, 11:00:46 UTC
oh my god.

elle.

i'm just - i'm speechless.

i'll write you a properly long comment later, when i can wrap my head around it. around this. because, wow.

this was incredible, this was beautiful and, fuck, the ending.

thank you so much for sharing this with us. truly.

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wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:15:08 UTC
thank you so much for taking the time to read, ari! and i'm glad that you enjoyed it! thank you darling!

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wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:17:31 UTC
THANK YOU! i was afraid that since i took such long breaks in between writing scenes that they would seem disjointed but i'm glad that you've found it worth the waiting!

that letter was based off of 'the moving perspective' by a sciencesoup, if you want to go read the entirety of the article, go ahead and google it and it'll lead you straight there (a bit of a psa because i love that blog)

thank you SO much for reading i really appreciate it so much!

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unrequitest January 15 2013, 12:28:56 UTC
oh.

this series is just so incredible. there were evenings, and there were mornings - the eleventh year. so simple yet it speaks volumes?

your writing style, i can't even begin to explain it in a way that makes sense, but its like a mixture of riddles and poetry and i'm left thinking about it afterwards.

also, cheering that liam and zayn figured themselves out. intently interested in what unfolds next, and in which perspective.

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wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:19:37 UTC
a lot of this part was themed after the bible, especially genesis, as you can probably tell and the way it was told is that massive change happens, but there were evenings and there were mornings, and god saw that it was good, so that's kind of what the ending of this part draws conclusion to.

i'm so flattered that you like my writing style and i'm so grateful for this comment.

and the next perspective will be harry's part! thanks for reading, love :)))

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wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:21:00 UTC
i try to give each character their own voice and i'm glad that it came through like that!

there's two more parts to the sequence (the next one being harry's) and i hope you enjoy it just as much :)

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wildefiree January 16 2013, 08:22:50 UTC
the breakdown of zayn and liam is a very slow, delicate sort of process so it makes sense that the rebuilding of them would be the same as well. it's obvious that zayn has a lot of problems he had to work through and i had hoped that this chapter would bring insight into what he's feeling and why he did the things he did.

thank you so much for this comment. i am so grateful of your audience in this sequence and i thank you for giving this a chance.

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wildefiree January 19 2013, 04:20:19 UTC
it's never explicitly said so it's kind of up to the reader's imagination. he did receive the letter, hinted at when zayn's baba left the letter on his dresser.

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