Across the Line - Chapter 5

Sep 16, 2013 20:31


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 12:57:03 UTC
Ooh congrats on the mini marathon. ^_ ( ... )

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noeldenever September 16 2013, 15:30:45 UTC
oh yes lady, it is interesting...thank you for writing & sharing, as always.
actually, it felt so calming reading this chapter.
jj's thoughts and contemplation (albeit being interrupted every 5 seconds by yunho, lol) felt so heartfelt...idk how to describe it properly. it was like a life journey on its own, how he tried to make peace with his life condition and picked up the pieces of his broken self. i just wanna hold him tight and tell him everything's gonna be ok...no need to feel so bitter, yunho's gonna make everything ok in the end ;;____;;
so jj was a tennis player too...wonder what could make him quit and let go of his dreams.
have a pity on my curiosity and update soon, ne? ^^ *smooches

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:01:45 UTC
hehe, no worries.

LOL Yunho interrupting JJ whenever he got in deep makes me giggle. So evil, but whatever. =P

Mm, I really like your description. It really does feel like a mini life journey in itself. He's a very strong person.

Oh thank god I'm not the only sappy romantic! I can't wait for Yunho's influence to help JJ settle into his life properly and smile so much more. T_T<3

Yesss, more of JJ's past is coming up.

Thank you for reading!

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leesayori September 16 2013, 16:06:51 UTC
Loved this chapter. It added so much volume to Yunho n jaw's character. I think am falling in lo e with Yunho here. He's just so gentlemanly n observant, not to mention down-to-earth. Totally loved their star gazing episode. Soit seems like JJ us impervious

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leesayori September 16 2013, 16:07:33 UTC
Loved this chapter. It added so much volume to Yunho n jaw's character. I think am falling in lo e with Yunho here. He's just so gentlemanly n observant, not to mention down-to-earth. Totally loved their star gazing episode. Soit seems like JJ us impervious to Yunho's charm.

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leesayori September 16 2013, 16:09:33 UTC
Loved this chapter. It added so much volume to Yunho n jaw's character. I think am falling in lo e with Yunho here. He's just so gentlemanly n observant, not to mention down-to-earth. Totally loved their star gazing episode. Soit seems like JJ is not impervious to Yunho's charm. Mayb Yunho is where he wanted himself to be n dats why he's hating on him. And, also am assuming there's some past to them

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:05:26 UTC
I'm glad you liked it!

Awww yes, I must admit that I'm loving the gentleman Yunho too. Down-to-earth people are the best~

Nyahah, of course JJ is not impervious to Yunho's charm. ^_~

They may have a linked past. We'll have to see. And I like your theories.

Thank you for reading!

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