Across the Line - Chapter 5

Sep 16, 2013 20:31


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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jhyjfan September 16 2013, 16:14:16 UTC
Spot!

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jhyjfan September 19 2013, 17:04:41 UTC
so Jj doesn't because he's somehow part of the reason why his dreams didn't work out?

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:07:15 UTC
Perhaps Yunho is part of the reason for JJ's spoiled dreams. Directly or indirectly... We shall have to see. =P

Thanks for reading!

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dilovesyunjae September 16 2013, 16:22:09 UTC
Oh will we find out why jj doesnt like yunho?

And oh god. Yunho half nekkid and sweating? Kyaaa!!!!

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:10:00 UTC
The reasons for JJ's hostility towards Yunho has certainly already been touched on but they shall perhaps become more apparent in time. ^^

LOL! It's a very lovely image, isn't it? You can borrow my fan. XD

I really owe it to everyone (and JJ) to try and incorporate scenes with half naked, sweaty Yunho into every chapter! Hah.

Thank you for reading!

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hyunnyb September 17 2013, 03:07:17 UTC
Lovely progress! YunJae laying on the court under the moonlight, analyzing each other and ultimately laughing together<3 I think the 100 day celebration should be interesting especially when Yoochun gets involved. Thanks for the update:)

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:11:39 UTC
Doesn't it just make you squee inside! *__*

Bahaha, interesting is doubtlessly an understatement when it comes to Yoochun and his ideas. I seriously can't wait for all of that. >D

Thanks for reading!

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hitomi2oo7 September 17 2013, 03:54:05 UTC
Found the story by chance and feel in love with it at first sigh~!
It's 5 am here so I will be short and to the point!
I hope that from now on onwards JJ's & Yunho relationship will get better coz I miss my OTP (>_<)
Thanks for all the hard work! (^3^)

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:12:49 UTC
Aww, that's great! I am glad you're enjoying it. ^^

5am!! Holy moly. I feel tired just seeing that. Go you!

Things can only get better from here, right? ^_~

Thank you for reading!

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jaan30 September 17 2013, 14:36:01 UTC
JJ perving on Yunhp LOL! I guess he can't resist Yunho's charms after all xD but he's very observant even while drooling ;P

Anyway, JJ is surprisingly nice to Yunho... even if he is still mildly annoyed by him. Yunho is being all.. well, YUNHO so I guess JJ has to admit that the problem is himself and not Yunho who he's been blaming for whatever happened. So JJ can't play anymore or doesn't want to? Seems like the latter for some reason, with the whole wrecking that sandcastle himself thing. Someone (Yunho?) was better than him so he quit trying? Hmm, I guess we'll see! I liked that they finally had a nice conversation though^^ and they can both read each other so well! That's a good start.

Can't wait to see what happens with their 100 day celebration, and more of Yoochun's antics LOL Thanks for the update!

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wild_terrain September 25 2013, 13:18:05 UTC
HAHA! Let's be honest, who could really resist Yunho's charms like that? Even his sweaty ones. >D

Oh yes, JJ is an intelligent drooler. He drools responsibly. XD

Yepp, Yunho is YUNHO so JJ just has to suck it up and admit it's hard to dislike him. It can be a difficult thing to admit though (not liking Yunho LOL but admitting you're the problem), so kudos to him.

I like your theories as always!

Having a connection is definitely a good start. It's kind of hard to ignore when you have one. hehe

Yoochun needs to be gagged and restrained, I'm telling you. Jay hasn't seen anything yet. XD

Thank you for reading! <3

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