This is Kisame's Critique post.

Lemme know how I'm doing with him here, but be sure to leave concrit, too.

It's nice to know the bad things, but the good things help, ya know!

So, it actually did snow on the island. Guess this place is a little different than most other islands.

Weird, yeah? White Christmas after all then.

Been workin' hard, so I can afford some gifts for some people, but 'm tired as Hell.

Think I'll go crash and go shoppin' later.

Private from Jack Sparrow

First off, anybody know a guy named Jack Sparrow? I gotta buy him a gift and I got no idea what ta get him.

End Private

Kinda gettin' cold on the island now. Anybody else hopin' it might snow? I'd like ta see that.

Private to friends of NejiDon't know if any of ya noticed, but Neji's shut off his 1337pod thing and ( Read more... )

I gotta get outta this apartment... There's nothin' ta do!

Think I'll go out and fight some monsters.

Anyone wanna join me?

Itachi?

( OOC: If anyone DOES want to go with him, they can just talk it over and action spam this post, since I won't be online much to start a log this week. )

Seems like the island has provided us with pets now.

[Kisame swings around with his LP, letting the screen focus on the creature that is standing only a few feet away, baring it's large teeth ( Read more... )

Private [Hackable]

Itachi's back.

He's all young an' stuff.

I'm pretty sure this was way before we ever met, but I wonder if that means he won't consider me a friend at least?

End PrivateLooks like I missed out on a bash a little while back ( Read more... )

Man, I can't believe I slept that damn long...

What's up island? Been a long time since I made a post on this thing.

So, uh... got a job at that Cherry Blossoms place as bouncer. Finally.

Private [Hackable]They're all missin ( Read more... )

I'm so freakin' bored and tired...

I wanna sleep, but I gotta find a job or somethin'.

I'll go job huntin' again here soon.

A shark as a cat.

Thanks island. Really.

Time to go get some of that fish I had leftover.

Private

So, Lavi doesn't remember anythin'? That's weird 'cause just the other day, he was perfectly fine...

I wonder if little bird will be alright...

End Private

Hey Lavi!

Ya probably don't remember me, but the name's Kisame! I'm one of your friends too!