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miera_c August 30 2006, 18:09:57 UTC
awww. That's the kind of fic you want to snuggle with. :)

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wickedwords August 30 2006, 20:54:53 UTC
Thanks, hon. *g* Hey, you remember my questions about posting to LCF regarding gen-ish, possibly pre-het stories right? If I posted this story there, how should I label that?

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flyingcarpet August 30 2006, 19:12:48 UTC
That's adorable, and really well-done-- you fit a lot in that little piece. I love the idea of how cut-off they are from home, so much more so than regular soldiers. And I admit, I have an enormous weakness for Lorne/Weir, even when it's just hints. :)

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wickedwords August 30 2006, 21:38:13 UTC
I go back and forth on my secondary partnerships, and I think that Lorne/Weir has some real chemistry to it. Thanks!

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kimberlite August 31 2006, 00:33:02 UTC
and wearing cotton sundress. He wondered if she'd sewed it herself.

I love how totally alien that seems (to me, anyway). I think you're missing 'a' after 'wearing'

He held up his hand to stop her, but she barreled on through, scientist-fast.

'Scientist-fast' is fabulous.

She smiled at him, the warmth in her eyes more than her tone telling him how welcome he was.

Aw, I really like the comfortable banter between them.

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wickedwords August 31 2006, 03:07:41 UTC
Oh! Thank you for catching the missing 'a'. I've added it in.

And yes! She is a little alien. How cool to put it that way.

Thanks.

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wickedwords August 31 2006, 16:30:40 UTC
Thanks!

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larianelensar August 31 2006, 04:57:23 UTC
Keyhole Country Club, Pine Haven, Wyoming.

I'm about 30 (or less) miles from there ....Just had to throw that out there when I saw it...How in the world do you know about Pine Haven?

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wickedwords August 31 2006, 15:19:04 UTC
I googled. I knew a little bit about Gilette and thought from what little we know about Lorne -- he was on a mining team on SG1 -- it seemed to be a good fit for where he might have grown up. So I looked around for someplace near there where a family reunion might be held, and decided that the Pine Haven would be a great place for it. So the story became one about the people of a very small town in Wyoming, and what they expect the world to be like, and how Lorne fits in with that.

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larianelensar August 31 2006, 20:19:37 UTC
*laughs* How funny. But I could imagine him from being from there, definitely.

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