I read this entire story in one day. Wow. I loved it. I like how everything was put in perspective. There's always a reason why ppl do the things they do. Imo tho, the soosun story could probably be developed further. Her death was pretty abrupt although there was mention that she couldn't let go of her parents' death. Overall tho,, I enjoyed the story. Keep up the good work! :) thank u
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