Comments | whitmans_kiss: Fic: HP, (sb/rl, rl/ofc, mwpp), drabble, "He's not going to say."

whitmans_kiss

Fic: HP, (sb/rl, rl/ofc, mwpp), drabble, "He's not going to say."

Jan 14, 2010 17:15

Title: "He's not going to say."
Word Count: 360
Author: whitmans_kiss
Rating: PG
Warnings: Smoking, drinking, two instances of crude language
Challenge: Dialogue, straight!Remus
Characters; Pairings: MWPP; Sirius/Remus, Remus/OFC
Disclaimer: All characters property of JKRowling. Story is original and mine.
Authors Notes: I love it when Remus smokes. I also think this ( Read more... )

hp: [mwpp], fic: length: [drabble], hp: [remus/ofc], fic, hp: [remus/sirius]

Comments 4

ceredwensirius January 14 2010, 23:14:47 UTC

This is adorable, Sirius would soooo refer to Remus' girly bits and the banter was precious.

I also like that little ache at the end!

whitmans_kiss January 15 2010, 02:52:53 UTC

Thank you! :D

Sirius' bits were fun to write, especially when he was making fun of Remus'.

Woosh, this fic was full of firsts. Never written MWPP before, am usually utter crap at dialogue, and omfg straight!Remus. No idea where that last came from, honest. It just sort of happened. Like an accident. XD

dogsunderfoot June 22 2010, 16:10:06 UTC

Gosh, this was hilarious! Until the end, and then it slams into a bit: "he couldn’t remember why he wanted to be drunk anymore, except perhaps to loosen the tight, twisted feeling he realized he felt deep in his chest."

'"There's only one twat at this table, and it's you."' *snort*

whitmans_kiss June 23 2010, 19:43:51 UTC

Thank you! I usually have a hard time writing dialogue, so when I set out to write a little thing that was hardly anything but, I had no idea it'd turn into this. :)