Making Spaces Part 5

[whiteraven1606]

Title: Making Spaces 5/?
Rating: NC-17 (overall

Comments

[almostlifesized]

I love how when I read your stories, my inner monologue goes something like this: "OMG PLOT POINT, why is there no discussion of this?" "Ahh, discussion time." Keeps us on our toes. And Chase is cute, I just want to snuggle him! House can do it for me.

[ice_whisper]

Awww. Just aww. The House/Chase scenes were just perfect. I loved the House/Abby phone call. Very in-character. haha

[starhanyou]

Loving your stories and your characterizations. Since you asked to be let known if there was anything off in your stories:

It took me a minute to sort out the first paragraph: //“Tell me again why he’s on my couch?” Abby snorted, which sounded really odd to House over the phone.// My first impression was that Chase was on _Abby's_ couch. Her snort should be with the rest of her reply.

And you've been had by your spell checker: "sex education lettuces" is not what you meant, I'm sure.

I've been using Firefox for a long time, I love it! Check out the extension "AdBlock Plus" if you haven't already.

[whiteraven1606]

Thank you.

The paragraphs decided to do their own thing. :P I think it is fixed now. And the misspelling (actually that was Google Docs' fault).

I like it so far. I've been moving away from Yahoo's stuff because of their crap lately. The first time I tried Firefox it crashed my computer and I spent days recovering corrupted files. This time it is behaving nicely (which scares me just a little). I'll look that the extension. Thanks again.

[wolf_gwinnya]

Love'd it just as the other chapters *g* Hope there'll be some more stuff soon.

[byrons_brain]

Wonderful.... I just love all of your writing.... can't wait for more....