Nice quick shot. I definitely liked how the first one to see Tezuka was the one to make the move and be top. Would have liked more of a sex scene *is perverted*, but it got the idea of enemies fucking out of mutual jealousy across perfectly. Most hot. *Two thumbs up*
I'm working on a fic that has some detailed tezuka/fuji pr0n in it, but being detailed just didn't seem to fit here. maybe because it's kind of an "off" pairing for me.
Ah, I can feel that. If it's sort of an unnatural match to begin with then a lot of description only brings out how they don't really fit together. I have that same problem sometimes. With that in mind- excellent job reaching a level in their relating/actions that was intriguing and sexy while not revealing how the pairing was "off". Honestly, I couldn't tell that this was a lesser favored pairing in the least. Can't wait to see this other detailed story ;)
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I'm working on a fic that has some detailed tezuka/fuji pr0n in it, but being detailed just didn't seem to fit here. maybe because it's kind of an "off" pairing for me.
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With that in mind- excellent job reaching a level in their relating/actions that was intriguing and sexy while not revealing how the pairing was "off". Honestly, I couldn't tell that this was a lesser favored pairing in the least.
Can't wait to see this other detailed story ;)
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