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whiskyrunner

Rough Trade, 2/2

Jan 06, 2011 11:58

Title: Rough Trade (you are now shooting at your imaginary friend in front of 400 gallons of nitroglycerin)
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Words: ~13,200 (~23,400 overall)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, references to depression, rough sex.
Author's Note: Based on this prompt on the kinkmeme. Part one is hereFML, this part was too long and I had to break ( Read more... )

oneshot, nc-17, h/c, arthur/eames, smut, fuck yeah inception, angst

Comments 11

hmm superjobbig January 7 2011, 22:02:34 UTC

First of all, this is AMAZING. I really enjoy reading your work, always turns me into a big pile of mushy, slobbering feelings. So much angst, and then so much love!
But one thing that just hit me about this particular piece is that it reminds me so much of a placebo song...
"Leave me bleeding on the bed, see you right back here tomorrow, for the next round..."
The lyrics fits almost perfectly. I could quote the whole thing here and it would all make sense!
"When I dream, I dream of your fists. When I dream, I dream of your kiss." A repressed Arthur singing to his Eames. I love the basic idea that he needs both violence and comfort form Eames.

osaki_nana_707 January 12 2011, 01:30:37 UTC

I've really just started using this livejournal, so I haven't commented before, but can I just say that you are literally one of the best writers I've ever read material from? Like, seriously. You're fucking AMAZING. I've read Requiescat twice, once to myself and once out loud to my bestie who was just as equally impressed. I was literally checking your journal every day to see if you'd posted the next chapter, even though I knew you wouldn't be back for a week just because it was THAT good. And this... This IS that good. Since it's AU, you could change the names and totally get this published. I'd buy it. It's extremely impressive. Your grasp on your craft is unbelievable, and I hope you write forever and ever and ever.

anonymous January 15 2011, 19:51:18 UTC

Holy fuck, that was amazing.

galaxysquirrel January 17 2011, 00:05:10 UTC

Just so you know, I kind of despise you right now (in a good way!) I'm halfway through the second section and you are KILLING ME. I keep reading paragraphs thinking 'oh, ok, ratcheting up the tension, Arthur will make it better by making the right decision here' but then BAM! It just gets worse and angstier. Well done. Just, unbelievably well done. Slow clap for you.

ilikecakee February 3 2011, 03:54:29 UTC

Re-reading again for the 358234890th time.
You have no idea how much I love this story.