Arcanum Paterfamilias -- Chapter Seven: Ndaluar Zalulya

[whips_n_dozers]

Arcanum Paterfamilias -- Chapter Seven: Ndaluar Zalulya
Authors: mfelizandy & fractured_chaos
Genre: Drama/Political Thriller. Futurefic, Genfic, Plotfic, Light Romance. No Sex.
Rating: Teen, for violence and Ed's potty mouth.
Chapter Word Count: 8600
Main Canon Characters/Pairings: Scar/OC. With nods to: Roy/Riza, Ed/Winry and Al/Mei. Hints of: Jean/Rebecca and Ling/Ran

Comments

[dreamer1789]

Great update! There is just so much, in way of plot value, going on, it's amazing. XD Also loved the unexpected Greelin cameo. ^_^

[whips_n_dozers]

Thank you so much! We couldn't pass up the opportunity for a little Greelin cameo. :D

[dzioo]

you're updating! and with such a great chapter! I loved how the rebell accused Roy for everything the world is made of and how Shan and others defended him. Wonder what's going to happen to their alliance when things start to get shady^^;

it's lovely really. you're building the setup very well, suspence is great and I love your humor^^ great story, please continue!

[whips_n_dozers]

Thank you! Sorry that your last piccie has been pushed back a bit... we had to finish up the night of the consulate party... we just couldn't have the nomads crash the party and neglect to show what happened after. :D

[capnhoozits]

This is exactly what I was hoping for, but more surprising than I expected! Nice little touch with Greeling, too. Wow wow wowee wow!

[whips_n_dozers]

Thank you! :D It's always nice to surprise our readers :D:D:D:D

[seta_suzume]

Aaaah, exciting (and some great creepy stuff in there too)! I wasn't expecting Greed- I enjoyed that fight.