your hand in mine

Oct 11, 2010 23:41

your hand in mine
g-dragon/top
rated pg
2,518 words
seunghyun’s gotten sick.
notes: this contains angst, if that’s not your thing.

seunghyun isn't here today, not really. )

!fanfiction, length: oneshot, type: angst, fandom: big bang, pairing: gdragon/top

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FIRST lovelyable October 12 2010, 07:17:25 UTC
I THINK THAT I HAVE KEYSMASHED ENOUGH FOR YOU BUT FOR THE LIKE 78TH TIME THIS IS GLORIOUS AND PERFECTION AND I AM IN AWE AND ALSO STILL rocking back and forth clutching my heart. HOW DARE YOU. I LOVE THIS, JFC. for my own health i cant reread it at the moment but, oh my god just everything. is perfect. you are magnificent. wat is kpop i only know gtop.

lol i am so obnoxious, wae

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Re: FIRST whetstone October 12 2010, 09:40:48 UTC
what is gtop, there is only broken!gtop

you are not!

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gdgdbaby October 12 2010, 07:20:32 UTC
SOBBING AT YOU FOREVER HDU DO THIS TO US

YOU ARE SO DUMB
YOU ARE REALLY DUMB
FOR REAL

>B|

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lovelyable October 12 2010, 07:27:34 UTC
HAD UR KEDZ
HAD UR WAF
HAD UR HUZBAN

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whetstone October 12 2010, 09:41:07 UTC
lmfao waylt.

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whetstone October 12 2010, 09:41:40 UTC
thank you so much! <3 i'm happy you enjoyed it. :D

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lovelyable October 12 2010, 07:26:52 UTC
ok i couldnt resist i had to find my favorites.

“Don’t worry,” he says, and he laces their fingers together, another thing he’d never done before. “I won’t let you get lost.”
goddamn you choi seunghyun, why is this line like this, were you born this way

He blinks twice, three times, and knots his fingers together, thumbs shaking. “Are you there?”

“Where else would I be?” he asks.
oh my GODDDD. this is where i started to lose it

But what he really misses are these things: the mornings he woke up to find the sun slanted enough that he could see the brown in Seunghyun’s eyes when he rolled over to look at him.actually this whole entire paragraph but i didn't want to put it all in italics, but yea the entire paragraph. is perfect. the little details that i can picture so well in my head that stretch all the way back to when they were in school, and every single one that jiyong remembers, just, alfkalakleslk. ♥ i hate you ( ... )

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whetstone October 12 2010, 09:44:40 UTC
;~;

lol i think that paragraph was my favorite to write and yet not bc yeah, depressing ;~; ♥ actually i think you pinpointed most of my favorite parts.

gets you napkins!!

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whetstone October 12 2010, 09:48:10 UTC
dlkgjs ahh thank you, it's really nice to hear that it blew you away and that you added it to your mems, and that you liked it enough to quote stuff back at me! and i'm sorry for making you sad DD:

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