FIC - “Did you think you could keep this secret?!” - JANSIS

[wheelie47]

Title: “Did you think you could keep this secret?!”
Author: wheelie47
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Van and Jake
Word count: 4,689
Summary: Jake tries to keep something hidden from Van…
Disclaimer: Don’t own characters, am not associated in any way with ATWT or Van and Jake. No offence intended.

Comments

[valenti1965]

Oh Anne! I am so glad you wrote this story at last! It was well worth the wait and just perfect!

Loved how Jake didn't want to tell Van that he got naked in his play...and yeah I loved how he distracted him! Very hot love scene!

Glad Riley got to play a part in this fic also!

Loved the end and Van turning up at the play.

Our Queen is back and long may she reign :-) xxx

[wheelie47]

Aw thanks Lou! So glad you liked it and thank you for convincing me to write it. Your support is wonderful x

LOL Jake's got a pretty good distraction technique, don't you think? ;)

But Van was always going to find out in the end lol.

Thanks again for reading. Glad you liked it! x

[paultheswan]

Anne,
what a brilliant story
Loved the way Riley played his part (as a part of the family)
This was a hot fic that had me focussed to read how Van & Jake would handle situations like that. In a very natural way you managed to give them characteristics that would fit in with Luke and Noah in a brilliant way. Well written
Loved it !!

Please tell us how Vans movie went later ok?

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Paul.

So glad you liked the story. I can just see them and their animals as part of a family. I'm really pleased that you thought their characteristics came through in the story.

Thanks again for reading!

Yeah - I'll have to do a sequel with Van's film in it ;)

[cindyls1969]

Aww. Queen of the Jansis does it again! Sweet and hot and oh so romantic. Loved it!

[wheelie47]

Aw thanks so much Cindy! Glad you liked it.

[daan73]

that is my jansis Queen !
you rock lady fabulous jansis
loving caring hot and sweet
funny with riley also
great job Anne , So glad you wrote this :) xx

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much, Dani! So glad you liked it. I simply couldn't resist - naked Jake was just too much of a pull lol

Glad you liked Riley's appearance.

Thanks so much!

[boriqua522]

DAMN!! that was funny, sexy, and HAWT all at once. loved this one as much as all your other work. you always know how to bring out these characters and bring the reader into their lives. can't wait for what ever is next.

[wheelie47]

Thanks so much for your wonderful comment!

So glad you liked it and I'm so pleased you thought the characters came to life in the story.

Thanks again x