SG-1 Fic: Signs of Weakness (PG)

[what_works]

Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Title: Signs of Weakness
Author: Em
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~840
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Prompt: from zats_clear Jack/Daniel, "Prisoners," missing/expanded scene, power
085. She ( Big Damn Table)
Summary: After returning from Handante, Daniel and Jack talk about signs of weakness.
Notes: To beg forgiveness for embarking into yet another

Comments

[sidlj]

This fic constantly surprised me by going in directions I wasn't expecting. Daniel putting his glasses on Jack, Jack remembering Sha're first, Daniel staying....

And I thought the imagery of the dregs of their beers intermingling as they swirled down the drain together was very symbolic. Of what, I'm not sure! *g* But it really caught my attention. :-)

[theemdash]

Yay for surprises! The glasses kind of surprised me at first and then I realized that Daniel has the same glasses-on-Jack kink that I have. ;)

The beer dregs catches my attention, too! I usually make the meaning of an imagry like that stand out a bit more, but this time I let it sit on its own. I'm glad the symbolism stood out, even if you couldn't explain why. Maybe I'm half-way there.

[green_grrl]

Wow. So intense.

Jack grins a smile that slowly stretches from Jack's face across to Daniel's face.

That's so lovely and light and them, and then ... yeah. Very heavy, real dealing with Daniel's marriage.

[theemdash]

Thank you. And see, no breaking up. They clearly have a very happy relationship after this. Heh.

[blackeyedwicca]

I loved it!!

Awesome work!!

[theemdash]

Thanks! :D

[blackeyedwicca]

No problem ^^

[theemdash]

Thanks. I'm glad it worked for you. I like early-season fic when it addresses Sha're. I think she's an insurmountable roadblock for Seasons 1-3.

[_minxy_]

Oh, the straight-forward, out-in-the-open feel of this is just heartbreaking. Very nice.

[theemdash]

Thanks. I enjoy honest characters. ;)