Jacobellis v. Ohio Part 6/6: Crown of Myrtle

Mar 09, 2011 17:51

Title: Jacobellis v. Ohio Part 6/6: Crown of Myrtle
Rating: R
Warnings: None for this one my friends.
Spoilers: None
Summary: He’d very deliberately not planned this out, because Kurt’s plans almost always go to hell.

Author’s Note: This is it folks, this is all there is.

He said what? )

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sun_and_rain March 10 2011, 00:17:21 UTC
And the best part about Kurt's confession is that he does it in a t-shirt and jeans. :)))) After reading all these depressing, terrifying, heartbreaking chapters, that just makes this happy ending all the more truthful and deserved and awesome.

Great job!!!

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what_larks March 10 2011, 01:35:29 UTC
So glad you caught that. The t-shirt also let me hint that Blaine has somehow developed a *huge* thing for Kurt's wrists and forearms (notice all the time he spends touching them).

Thank you so much for reading (and for sticking through when I confused you ;) )

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mary_flanner March 10 2011, 04:40:22 UTC
So, I wasn't making that up? The forearms/wrists thing? You're winning.

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what_larks March 10 2011, 05:25:33 UTC
Nope, totally there intentionally...or well, it happened and I realized that somewhere in part 2 I had decided without really noticing that Blaine had a thing for Kurt's forearms. I figured it would probably be my own special detail that people wouldn't see unless I pointed it out because I didn't make much of it.

You *would* be the one who noticed.

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mary_flanner March 10 2011, 00:29:55 UTC
"Boy, you hit that."

Oh Larks. Sometimes your eloquence is surpassed only by your wisdom.

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mary_flanner March 10 2011, 00:43:21 UTC
Loving the parallel HotPeter/Mercedes "tell me about him" scenes.

I kind of want to know more about the threats. You build it so well and so ominously that I want to see it through. You even give hints as to what kind of person it could be.

As was said before, t-shirt and jeans is absolutely fantastic, as is your mantra of "I'm not planning, fantasizing is not planning, this isn't what I was going to say wait I didn't plan." So awesome. I like arbitrarily deciding 7 a.m. is okay to get up and makes him not a crazy person. And I like that it actually is sort of kittens and rainbows, despite what you said.

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what_larks March 10 2011, 01:31:52 UTC
One of those anxieties that I mentioned? That the fact that I leave the messages quasi-unrelsolved would bother people and/or leave a funny taste in their mouths ( ... )

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mary_flanner March 10 2011, 01:35:30 UTC
Oh, okay, cool. I get it now. Aces.

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what_larks March 10 2011, 01:39:10 UTC
See a story should never require a long "here was my motivation" explanation to get someone to get it. It probably means I should fix it. I'll think about it.

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andhopeto March 10 2011, 01:28:02 UTC
This story was so beautiful, and broke my heart a little bit, but you mended it back together perfectly, and, seriously. Kurt explaining Blaine to Mercedes was just such a gorgeous awakening moment; I have so much love for it.

This was so lovely.

I'm just sad it's already over and there isn't more on the creepy messages, but I still really loved this last chapter.

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what_larks March 10 2011, 01:48:31 UTC
Thank you, I'm so glad I could mend a few hearts after all the time I spent breaking them.

This whole story may or may not have been born out of Kurt's "how could I not have known" and Blaine's "I love you, I'm so sorry."

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aurelie296619 March 10 2011, 01:56:21 UTC
This is the perfect ending to a story that has kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. Just perfect, everything from Kurt finally waking up and smelling the lovely emotional coffee to his wardrobe to the kiss. Thank you so much for writing this story, I am sad to see it finish though happy that it ends well. I can't wait to see what you work on next, any ideas or inspirations yet?
Once again, loved it, thanks for writing ^^

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what_larks March 10 2011, 03:38:32 UTC
Aww thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The wardrobe thing was initially serendipitous. It was a throw-away comment in Part 2 of Lesser Evils that I had decided to call back. It wasn't really until I started writing this part that I realized what a huge deal it was.

I've nothing concrete in the works right now. We'll see if anything knocks me over the head in the future.

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