Let It Burn - Oneshot - ReitaxRuki

[whaffle2006]

Let It Burn
Oneshot
Rating: PG13 - NC17
Warnings: MxM relationship, strong language, strong sexual scene, character death
Pairings: ReitaxRuki
Genre: AU, Supernatural, Drama, Angst, Smut, Violence, Gore
Summary: Years, he had been on the run for years. He’d been running from his coven for years. He was a witch, running from the one thing that

Comments

[sarky_chepooka]

FIRST OF ALL, you can stop thinking that this sucks RIGHT NOW because it doesn't. Not. At. All.

SECOND OF ALL, ughhh all that angst ;____; I did read the warnings, and I was like IT'S OKAY I'M PREPARED FOR THIS I CAN DO THIS

BUT I WASN'T PREPARED AT ALL AND THIS IS NOT OKAY OMG ;_______________;

Idk what to say. It's so saaaaad. Especially since Reita has to live with it for the rest of his life, like he's just going through life collecting heartbreaks ;____;

But I really really liked this at the same time. The Reituki was so cute, and then... and then...

*cries forever*

This is the worst comment ever I'm so sorry. The angst killed me.

[whaffle2006]

O.o; Okay, I'm sorry... I'll stop thinking that haha

Yes! Angst! Lovely wonderful angst! Hehe I don't think anyone could ever really be ready for a warning like that lOl it was pretty sad though, I agree.

I'm sorry dear ><;

It is very sad. I felt I needed to put Reita through a lot of despair for this. I think it was about time he had his moment to shine in heartbreak XD

I'm glad that you liked this. I was worried, because... well, this turned out way different than I had intended it to be. I mean, I wanted the angst... but, the rest not so much lOl

Aw~ no it isn't dear ^^
I enjoyed your comment very much.

[sarky_chepooka]

Haha sorry, it's just that when I see writers say something negative about their own work and I read it and think it's great, I really want to make them realise how good it is!^^

[whaffle2006]

I know what you mean. I can be the same way. It is a definite confident boost though!
Thank you dear

[creepy_cally]

Wow... just... wow. You've done it again! Usually when there's witches and hunters in a story, ruki's always the witch, well... usually. Haha. Now it's great to see a change here! You really twist this up into something different! Though maleficent sort of came into my mind when reita's mom decided to show up... and I was like wth... that was disney!! LOL. And reita's mom is even more cruel here than the average maleficent. Excuse my weird ass imagination. Hahaha.

[whaffle2006]

Oh, thank you dear XD
I was a hundred percent confident in this little piece, but, I was convinced to post haha
That is true, Ruki is usually the witch, but, I thought our Rei would be a pretty nice witch himself XD
I tried my best to twist it up.
I haven't had the chance to see the movie yet ><
I've been dying to watch it, but, I just never get the time. I haven't even got a chance to watch the new Godzilla haha
But, thank you for reading and commenting dear ^^

[random_x13]

D:
Not sure of the direction you were initially going in.... but this turned out quite well! Albeit sad because NOOOO! RUKIIII!!! ......but a good little plot!
Reita with super witchy powers...hot. ^^;

[whaffle2006]

Even now, I'm not sure where the heck I was going with this either... = =
Whew... I'm happy that this turned out well. I was seriously worried...
I did intend for this to be sad, so... I guess I kind of got what I wanted lOl

I thought Reita being a witch would be something interesting haha

[hamhamheaven]

Lovely and sad. I have so many unanswered questions, but I don't mind that part. Poor Ruki! And poor Reita having to witness his lover's death. TT_TT

[whaffle2006]

Oh, thank you!
Yes, there are a lot of questions, but, it adds to the mystery of it.
Yeah, I almost didn't want to kill him, but then... where would the angst be XD
It totally sucks for Rei. I mean, he's my absolute fave, but, he needs to suffer once in a great while ^^

[hamhamheaven]

I love angst and suffering, but character death gets to me. Does Ruki know that Rei is your fave? (^_~)

[whaffle2006]

I know what you mean ><
Character deaths always get me too.
Haha I don't think Ruki has figured out Rei is my fave yet.

[makochi_kun]

What a sad cycle, can't imagine how many times Reita had to go through that.
Kinda makes you wonder what Reita did to be able to prolong his life like that.
But I liked how theres so many unanswered questions because it gives it that mystery factor in. The template(?), not sure if thats the correct word for it, but the way this oneshot is written makes me imagine it as a music video...or like a fan made video.
a VERY well made fan made video.
The way I imagined it I dunno why but there was so much color, a lot of orange and red. very Fall like. Im a real sucker for flashbacks in movies/books anything ;p
So I know you didn't have as great feeling in how this fic flowed but I just wanted to say it was lovely.
short. sweet. sad. surreptitious.
I dunno why but I immediately had to go listen to:
Barcelona - Please Don't Go and All Tine Low's - Painting Flowers

[whaffle2006]

It is really a suck-y cycle. I almost feel bad for doing that to little Rei haha
Oh, it does make everyone wonder. Me and him will be taking it to the grave though XD
Like a music video? Hm, now that you've said that, it does have that feel to it, don't it.
I'm so very, very happy that you guys had enjoyed this, despite how I felt about it myself haha

Oh~ those are both really good songs <3

lOl well, that's what you get with Ruki being a hunter I guess XDDD