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wh_mermaid

Miserable At Best Chapter Six

May 11, 2011 00:47

Villa wipes his hands against his jeans, palms already wet with perspiration. This idea was grand and inspiring a day and a thousand miles away, but in the present, he is scared. His mind is a steady stream of ‘what ifs’ like what if Silva had already moved on, what if Silva hated his guts, or what if Silva just slammed the door in ( Read more... )

david silva, miserable at best, fic, david villa, fernando torres

Comments 10

notoriousjk May 11 2011, 05:22:38 UTC

FINALLY ( ... )

wh_mermaid May 11 2011, 05:36:00 UTC

<33333333333333333333333 I'm glad you liked it ^_^.... and there will be sex, oh lordy, will there be sex. I'm pretty sure the epilogue is just going to be 3000+ words of smut. yay smut!

Sorry that this took so long ;_; I'm a lazy bitch, there's really no other excuse.

And yes, Silva in drag fic kekekekekekekekekeke.... seriously thinking about adding that to the 'to do' list ^^;

<3

notoriousjk May 11 2011, 05:54:40 UTC

when you say "to do list" you mean "do Silva in drag right?"

mhmmmmmmmm smut of the Silva/Villa variation??? YES PLEASE

krisseems May 11 2011, 06:16:09 UTC

I am so happy you posted this (of course it was right before I was going to sleep). It's all so good. Silva is so heartbreaking in this. I didn't think he was ever going to let himself believe that he could have Villa again. I like that there was no sex in this because with everything they went through it would have been too soon. And Pepe!!! God he is awesome in this. I love that Villa thought that no one knew about him and Silva, and Pepe is just like "please, everyone knew".

I can't lie and say that Silva/Adam haven't slowly crept up on my Silva/Villa OTP, but if you write a smutty epilogue, I will definitely not be ignoring it as I did the certain wizarding epilogue.

bumblebee13 May 12 2011, 02:30:56 UTC

Finally!!!!! It was a really nice ending boo! <333333333

kfunk22 May 12 2011, 03:52:26 UTC

oh nora! you know how i have been longing for an update to this fic! it did not disappoint. your characters were as fully realized in this episode as the last!
i was so glad to see the return of my beloved DOOR! (it stole the show really with "freckled bringer of fried foods" and the hysterical snorting that ensued.)
even in silva's fragility and brokenness i was glad to see him snark back, "man-up" as it were. we had a meeting of the minds once about men being men, and you sure walked the walk here.

if only all things so long-anticipated would turn out this well. what a lovely conclusion. and, as if that weren't enough, there's mention of a smut-drenched epilogue? just...gah!

oldwilkie October 31 2011, 14:37:36 UTC

sorry, lurking here after a rec list from I don't know who, sorry. But I didn't want to leave without saying how much I've enjoyed this fic and how believable are their voices and actions. And the Door! The Door was brilliant! But, mostly, I wanted to say thanks because the wags here are wonderful and amazing and footie fandom need more of that.
So, thank you!