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were121

The Humpty Dumpty Affair

Jan 23, 2009 20:43

Title: The Humpty Dumpty Affair
Pairing: George/Alex
Word Count: 3, 074
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Prequel to "Giving You An Answer" by loveable_me_87. Meredith sets out to help George recover from recent emotional damage he's suffered. When she finds him, she discovers something she could've never imagined. Based on quote from Season 2, Episode 21 ( ( Read more... )

pairing: george/alex, fandom: grey's anatomy

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ice_whisper January 24 2009, 06:07:35 UTC

*has completely melted*

Bottom!Alex always does me in. And I loved Meredith hiding in the laundry cart.

were121 January 24 2009, 06:09:24 UTC

LOL ,thanks it took forever to write....but what exactly does bottom? mean...

ice_whisper January 24 2009, 06:10:42 UTC

In sex. Bottom and top. Got fucked and did the fucking. lol In the anime fandom, it's referred to as uke (bottom) and seme (top).

were121 January 24 2009, 06:35:10 UTC

Oh,LOL, i knew what bottom and top refer to, but i just didn't know exactly what you were referring to in the fic!! my bad!! and in my opinion, alex bottoming is a plus because half the fun of reading georgealex is watching george be protective and the "guy" of the relationship ;)

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were121 January 24 2009, 06:47:08 UTC

the parts marked with ** and ending with** were just added in . there's two sets, one after george grabs alex's hand in the parking lot; the other is after the flashback comes back to modern day. sorry about that..i got so lost in the romance that i forgot the technicalities.

ice_whisper January 24 2009, 07:04:03 UTC

Ah. Okay.

Haha. Well, I like ur adjustments.

were121 January 24 2009, 07:07:34 UTC

thanks =D

rps_lizardspock January 25 2009, 04:57:02 UTC

Oh yay! I like this! When writing Giving You An Answer I never considered how they got together in the first place and you've gone and made it make sense. I love how Meredith was wanting to 'fix' George. You got her very in character, especially in the beginning in the cafeteria. Great work!

were121 January 25 2009, 07:03:11 UTC

Thanks!! I really wanted to tie the story together using some of the actual stuff from the episode , so I just played off of Meredith's emotions....I'm actually brainstorming a sequel to giving you an answer, so that's my next project. My only regret was that the humor kind of failed...the part where i wrote:

A thought suddenly struck Alex. “The total understanding, the loving eyes, the irresistible hair; this is freakin’ fantastic, I’m being McDreamied.”

was supposed to be funnier but the humor in general failed =(.