Fic: Sphere of Influence 6/7

[wendymr]

Story: Sphere of Influence
Author: wmr / wendymr 
Characters: Ninth Doctor, Jack Harkness, Rose Tyler
Rated: PG13
Summary: He’s like a magnet. A gravity well, sucking in everything within his sphere of influence, drawing them to him whether they like it or not.

Written for space_monkey52 in return for an extremely generous donation to the Queensland

Comments

[dshael]

Nice to see that when one of the trio is making a mistake, the other two are ready to step up and smack him (or her) back in line. That's another way of saying, Gah! JA-ack!! *g*

[wendymr]

Yeah, Jack!!

I think they feel they know him well enough by now - and like him, too - that they want him to do the right thing for him, not the easy thing for them. So... resolution on the way? Maybe!

[yamx]

*melts at key scene*

The Doctor and Rose are lovely in this. Jack, otoh, needs a good smack upside the head.

Looking forward to him getting it. *g*

[wendymr]

Believe it or not, I thought of you when I decided to include a key scene :) There are a couple of tropes I use in stories that now go accompanied by 'X might like this!'

Jack needs a smack upside the head? Never was a truer word spoken, and have you been peeking at the final chapter? *g*

[yamx]

I have a trope?! Oh, super! Can we call it the "yamx trope" and make a Wikipedia entry? *g*

It's sweet of you to think of me.

No, i haven't peeked... yet! *g

[lindenharp]

Oh, Jack. . . pride won't keep you warm at night. Listen to Rose. Please.

[wendymr]

It won't keep him warm at night, no... but we know what would! *g*

[othermewriter]

Bravo Doctor he just really did the right thing on this one. Come on Jack you can protect them, in spite of the odds against you being blind.

[wendymr]

But does Jack believe that? Read on to see!

[canaana]

Oh, Jack. There's a difference between integrity and pigheadedness.

[wendymr]

There is indeed, but it's just that he thinks he's on the right side of that distinction :/