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Fic: You Can't Make an Omelet.... for Indelicateink

Dec 08, 2013 17:50

Author: lady_ganesh
Recipient: indelicateink
Title: You Can't Make an Omelet Without Breaking Some Telepaths
Rating: PG-ish
Characters/Pairing(s): pre-Crawford/Schuldig
Summary: Crawford has a future in mind, and he's more than capable of destroying anyone who stands in his way.
Warnings: N/A
Word Count: 2,443
Author's Notes: Thanks to red_squared for betaing.

( You Can't Make an Omelet )

rating: pg, gift 2013, characters: brad crawford, characters: schuldig

Comments 11

athena8 December 26 2013, 22:28:17 UTC

Wow, this was amazing! I really enjoyed the various machinations in Crawford's mind, so sharp and focused on the prize. Schuldig is a joy, his detachment and shamelessness so characteristically him.

I loved when they finally found each other...lol. Such an intriguing clash of powers. Loved it!

lady_ganesh December 27 2013, 02:38:32 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! It's really fun trying to get into Crawford's head, knowing he's normally ahead of everyone, but not always.

indelicateink December 27 2013, 02:26:36 UTC

Eee! *runs, jumps, rolls around in it, loves it* This is so, so great. :3 Thank you!!

I love how you've written their dynamic, the conniving, the telepaths Crawford has to slog through to get to Schuldig. :) And eee, Farfarello. And Schuldig's cockiness! Heh. All of it, so great.

Especially loved: "See, the problem with most telepaths is they're empaths too. They start feeling bad for the crazies, then the next thing you know they're screaming at shadows and climbing the walls. That's why I'm better, Crawford. Because I do not give a fuck about any of you." Awesome.

lady_ganesh December 27 2013, 02:52:40 UTC

I'm so glad you like it!

Thank you! They're so weirdly functional in their screwed-up-ness.

lindentreeisle December 27 2013, 03:03:13 UTC

Haha, Schuldig, you asshat.

I love the title!

lady_ganesh December 28 2013, 00:24:46 UTC

Thank you! It's not often I'm that pleased with a title but this one made me grin.

viridian5 December 27 2013, 12:54:29 UTC

I'm so very fond of witty, sarcastic evil. There's Crawford calmly and quietly killing off the people who are in his way, then he meets his fated partner who does doles out suffering for fun. It's so sweet that they deserve each other. *g* Great read!

lady_ganesh December 28 2013, 00:25:09 UTC

They so, so do. Thank you!

andmydog December 27 2013, 23:32:57 UTC

That's why I'm better, Crawford. Because I do not give a fuck about any of you.

YES.

lady_ganesh December 28 2013, 00:25:16 UTC

My hero.