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7 ways in 7 Days

Oct 22, 2004 23:05

Here's part 5

( Day 5: Cautious Cowgirl )

Comments 9

freakish_freak October 23 2004, 05:06:38 UTC

What I really love about this is the main idea. Instead of shagging Draco as much as she possibly could, Hermione longed for some space. And the she-wouldn't-be-able-to-walk idea was fab. Good job.

ashleyfanfic October 25 2004, 23:13:27 UTC

I'm so happy you're enjoying the fic. Thanks for the great feedback. The way I see it is that no matter how much you love someone, that sometimes you just need time to yourself.

sweden_girl25 October 23 2004, 05:35:03 UTC

wonderful chapter

ashleyfanfic October 25 2004, 23:14:05 UTC

Thank you very much. Happy you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback!

raffyv October 23 2004, 20:19:42 UTC

Oh, Ashley! That was simply mesmerizing!

Sis was actually teasing me because I was smiling like an idiot the whole time while reading your chappie. I just love the way you portrayed Hermione! I mean, who would want to read instead of shag during their honeymoon, right?! Only our Hermione!

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ashleyfanfic October 25 2004, 23:14:45 UTC

LOL...I love that you love it. I love reading your replies to stuff I've written! You always make me smile!

julesndairyland October 24 2004, 18:27:15 UTC

Ash:

The sex was fabulous but I loved the banter ever more:

She sighed, "I suppose I should apologize for wanting space."

He shook his head, "No need. I understand. You're very independent and you needed time to breathe. Don't apologize for being who you are."

She smiled, "And people asked why I was marrying you."

"Really? Sod them all."

She closed her eyes, "I think I could use some sleep."

He looked down at her, "You tire easily."

"It's your fault."

He smiled, "Then I accept responsibility for it."

She smiled, "Shut up Draco."

"Yes Hermione."

I love your Draco, can I clone him?

Great chapter!

ashleyfanfic October 25 2004, 23:15:57 UTC

Hmmm...if you figure out how to clone him, you must share! I expect full Draco availability if I want it! :)

Thanks for the feedback, Jules. You're one of my favorite authors so I really appreciate it when you comment on it. And the fact that you like it just puts me over the moon! Thank you!

julesndairyland October 26 2004, 17:17:51 UTC

Well thanks so much for the shout out!

I would certainly make enough Draco!clones for all to enjoy unlimited access *smirk*

And Ooh! A DD icon, with dancing feet *shivers* Roar!