Comments | weatherinmyhead: Stop looking, start seeing (high school!AU). ficlet.

lady_quark in weatherinmyhead

Stop looking, start seeing (high school!AU). ficlet.

Dec 29, 2010 22:44

Title: Stop looking, start seeing (high school!AU)
Pairing: Rubén de la Red / Esteban Granero
Rating: R
Word Count: 613
written for fillesanyonnon &hearts

( Esteban couldn’t shake his head as quickly as he wanted, staring at Rubén with wide eyes, falling into these dark eyes, so full of secrets usually, so open and unprotected now. )

impressions for my empress, type: slash, rating: r, comm: footballverse, player: rubén de la red, player: esteban granero, fandom: football

Comments 7

lee_gerrard December 31 2010, 00:51:04 UTC

Oh Grace!

I simply love this!

It is wonderfully written and you know that I have a little weak spot for Esteban/Ruben... They just don't get enough attention from the footie-fanfic-writers... :)

This wanders straight to my favourites! <3

lady_quark January 1 2011, 20:08:17 UTC

I'm glad that you love it. ... And actually this reminded me of the story I've written for you, with them both being school boys, again. .... :)

And yes, Rubén/Esteban is definitely one of my Top 5 underrated pairings ...v ery very sadly. :(

Thanks for the comment love ... and I hope you had a brilliant New Year's Eve!! :)

july_v January 1 2011, 19:50:49 UTC

Is this even real?
I got distracted from that movie I'm watching on TV because I kind of lost myself in this.
They're a nice couple and the story... Especially that last bit with Ruben recognizing white because of his team and how he settles for feeling the blush if he can't properly see it.

(May I ask where you're from? I hope I'm not being rude but you have some small mistakes like 'they knees' (Their knees) that sound like English's your second language, yeah?

lady_quark January 1 2011, 20:05:39 UTC

Oh, you leave such lovely feedback, I don't even know what to reply to that.
But thank you, really. :)

And ah, got me. Yes, English is only my second language, therefore I can't help mistakes here and there ... "-.-
... I'm from Germany, therefore there happen to be some. ...
And no, this is definitely not rude! I shall scan through the text one more time carefully and try to correct them! :)

july_v January 1 2011, 20:12:56 UTC

That's because I ramble ;P It's my charm.

A fellow German! that's great ^^
And yeah, I make sillier mistakes than you do but no one sees them because I have a beta who corrects them before I post my fics. It's nothing wrong with mistakes, I just thought I'd point them out to you.

lady_quark January 1 2011, 20:15:50 UTC

Ah, okay, na wenn du auch aus Deutschland kommst, dann schenke ich mir das Englisch einfach mal.
Wenn ich Deutsch spreche, mache ich nämlich eigentlich keine Fehler. ;)

Und eigentlich habe ich auch eine beta-readerin, aber ich schicke ihr nicht alles, was ich schreibe /Ich weiß, das macht keinen Sinn ^^/ ... deswegen schleichen sich in meine Drabbles und kürzere Geschichten auch gerne mal Fehler ein /in meinem letzten Kommentar war auch wieder einer drin... there, their, they're ... wenn ich mich nicht konzentriere, dann schmeiße ich das im Eifer des Gefechts schon mal über den Haufen ... "-.-/
Na ja. Danke schön, auf jeden Fall.

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