unJudged - Chapter 3

Nov 21, 2007 16:23


unJudged
Chapter 3 - Heaven and Hell
Written By: We_Dreamerz
Betaed By: Xanntonya
Genre: Slash: Gale/Randy
Warnings: None
Rating: NC17
Feedback: Is love
Disclaimer: This is Fiction I don't know Gale or Randy and this didn't happen. It's all meant to be fun and no disrespect is intended.

Summary:  Gale Harold and Randy Harrison.  We all had our suspicions. ( Read more... )

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Comments 26

singlewoman November 22 2007, 04:48:35 UTC
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. The little things you put in such as to why Randy sits in Gale's lap are just great. And the scene in the parking lot was so beautifully done.

Can't wait for more.

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we_dreamerz November 22 2007, 13:35:21 UTC
I love the little things too. =) Thank you so much for reading... and I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

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we_dreamerz November 22 2007, 13:39:08 UTC
Yeahhh I'm glad I could you make you happy. =) Thank you so much for your words... they encourage me to continue. =) I am definately going for that put you in the moment kind of feel and am so glad you think I'm pulling it off.

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masterglory November 22 2007, 09:05:20 UTC
What can I say?
That you made me shiver only with their thoughts?
That your description of their kiss, and petting is more arousing (*blushes*yeah) then a long detailed fuck? Oh my god, I really need a long cold shower...or maybe directly another chapter, it's better, whoa!!!
That was so..beautiful, you've created a atmosphere so sensual, precious and deep down inside, thanks, thanks, grazie, sei bravissima!!!^____^

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we_dreamerz November 22 2007, 13:48:17 UTC
Thank you!!!*grin* Then I did my job! =) I've actually found the same thing to be true. Things like that.. and sexy talk and kisses and whatnot can be more arousing than the actual fucking. And I like to focus on that when I write.

Oh! Italian! *hugz* I have always wanted to learn to speak Italian. I think it's a beautiful language. What a beautiful country you live in!

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foxylady187 November 22 2007, 14:11:38 UTC
I love everything about this fic, particularly its eroticism and sensuality. I found myself getting totally wrapped up in the story. Thank you! :)

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we_dreamerz November 23 2007, 03:09:12 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm so glad you're enjoying this.

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Public Confession legalmonet November 22 2007, 20:23:05 UTC
I SWORE that I would never read RPS. And I would hate it if someone speculated about my own RL relationships.

BUT . . . I'm hooked. Yours is the first RPS I've read. And it's so well written and compelling.

Guess that's why you should never say "never" in The QAF Fandom.

I love being wrong and changing my mind!

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Re: Public Confession we_dreamerz November 23 2007, 03:23:02 UTC
Wow what a confession! Thank you so very much! Yeah I'm learning the never say never thing too when it comes to this fandom. Heck I never thought I'd WRITE an RPS. But.. here I am. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. =)

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Re: Public Confession wouldbedorothy November 26 2007, 22:34:14 UTC
Isn't that great??? :)

lol, I swore I'd never even read RPS, look at me...

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