in the words you are fading (the aftermath of one-night-stands).
pg-13. patrick/pete.
I don't know how this sounds, I'm just posting it because I know that if I re-read it, I'll hate it, haha. so tell me if you like it or not!
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and your skin is like porcelain... )
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Maybe it could do with a brief run past a beta and a few slight edits, but for something you can't bear to re-read, I'd say that's pretty damn brilliant. Kudos!
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here, aren't I? lol. and I can totally picture Pete biting someone.
actually, it's slight odd how WELL I can picture that. O_O
I never like to re-read my own stuff, because I'm one of those people
that INSTANTLY wants to chage it, y'know? but thank you SOOOOOO much
for reading this! comments never fail to make me feel better! <333
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Usually I get stalls and pauses in my writing if I go fast like I did on this one,
so I'm really surprised at how it turned out <3 thank you so much, love!
believe it or not, those two lines were not even in my copy of it; I looked at it
and thought it was missing something, then I added those two lines at the end,
do you think it really wrapped it up? :D this is such an amazing comment,
thank you so much love!
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Oh, oh! This is the point where my heart broke, thank you very much.
don't you do this to me, stupid, or I'll bite you.
This was a lovely piece and I'm very glad you posted it!
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so thank you sooo much for that! *tapes heart back together*
haha, can't you just see Patrick breaking up with Pete, and then Pete bites him? :D
thank you so much, that feela really good to hear! I'll definately be posting again,
I have something else that's ready to post, but I just can't find the prompt, heehee. <3
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DON'T YOU LOVE IT WHEN THINGS IN FIC REMIND YOU OF REAL LIFE
ONLY THE CURE = DAMIEN RICE IN MY CASE. >:o
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