the way we shine

[withoutmaps]

the way we shine
229 words // brendon/ryan
for Mar 13, 07.

Comments

[blushandrecover]

So unbelievably adorable, yet there's that sense of something deeper. I didn't look to see which prompt you did until I finished, but I knew, because I remember the glitter so well. Very nice job.

[withoutmaps]

thank you ♥

[girlintheband]

Oh, this is just lovely. The last two paragraphs in particular; beautiful. I really like how Brendon doesn't want to be the responsible one. I think that resonates well with my idea of him.

[withoutmaps]

Brendon just wants to have fun, I think. Thank you :D

[ellyjelly]

Aww I love this! The idea is perfect, and your writing is, too!

[withoutmaps]

Oh, thank you so much ♥

[fauxaffliction4]

I absolutely adore the last two paragraphs.
Especially this makes it easier to smudge his fingers through Ryan's makeup following the show. Through birds or spirals, Brendon pushes the colors together and makes new shades of blue, red, black.

<33

[withoutmaps]

Just this image, of Brendon messing up Ryan's makeup is my favorite. I'm glad you liked!

[bloodygoodgirl]

That is way cute, I love Brendon not wanting to be the responsible one.

[withoutmaps]

Brendon is such a little kid, I feel like. Responsibility is so not his thing. Thanks!