It's been a week since I tried sending it to Mandadex so I think it's officially rejected by now, I'll share it here instead if you don't mind:

https://mega.nz/file/oFBhCR4Z#EA2sfRMUOEw_AuXiAJ7xdRbLp8YLqynHGNxDNXC6pz8

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here: this 5 pages are the prologue:
http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/b/2067888160083210279

please forgive any gramar mistake,i speak apanish...
critics and advises are all welcome but try not to kill me with them...
if you like it i'll keep drawing