Hot damn! I knew it would be good when these two finally got around to it, but... whew! I guess you can't be ready for mind-blowing awesome. Where to start
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But I like roller coasters - kidding! The ride's almost over and I'm not going to mess anything up too much. I'm not that mean. ;) This feedback made my day btw. Thank you!
First off, great naughty time...I thought for a second they wouldn't go through with it (again), but you sure made up for the earlier aborted attempt
I'm sure I'm going to get flak for this but...they almost didn't. *ducks* Originally the odds were against it because Ivy still had doubts about Rachel. So I kept trying to write a "noble Ivy/let's wait till you're better/sure" scene but in the end I just couldn't see how they could pull back again, not if they meant everything they said in the last chapter. Ivy may be a better vampire but she's still a vampire, and Rachel was not about to let her go to someone else. It worked out fine once I let them do what they wanted.
well, I'd really ask for Ivy to make me her love slaveLol, get in line. ;) Writing sexually assertive but vulnerable Ivy was insanely fun once I got the balance right. With the blood sharing, I
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Great story! Hard to believe KH or Ivy or Rachel hasn't gotten in the way of Ravy finally being together. I look forward to your epilogue and more stories from you; I know I'll be entertained and engaged. Ciao Kali
I read the whole thing through and I must say this is one of the most enjoyable and entertaining Ravy fics out there. You can really write. Too bad that the books won't end this way, and even if they do, it may be way too late. Thanks for laboring to bring this story to life, I really appreciate it.
*takes a bow* Hehe thanks! "Worth the wait" is exactly what I wanted to hear.
You should've heard me when I got that "post too large" message. "Argh" was not the four letter word that came to mind.
My muse thanks yours! Funnily enough, at the start I had such a hard time getting the balance on the blood/sex right that at one point I bowed my head over the keyboard and wished that I could borrow your muse for awhile. It's a good thing nobody heard me.
mush...my brain is just mush
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October 16 2010, 17:21:03 UTC
finally!!! about time, i tell ya!!! oh my! my brain is just mush right now...but i do remember telling myself to to tell you to thank your muse and your betas for such a fantastic, wonderful, "insert-another-adjective-for-uber great-here"! i can't wait for my brain to turn into goo again once we read the epilogue. hahaha!!!
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First off, great naughty time...I thought for a second they wouldn't go through with it (again), but you sure made up for the earlier aborted attempt
I'm sure I'm going to get flak for this but...they almost didn't. *ducks* Originally the odds were against it because Ivy still had doubts about Rachel. So I kept trying to write a "noble Ivy/let's wait till you're better/sure" scene but in the end I just couldn't see how they could pull back again, not if they meant everything they said in the last chapter. Ivy may be a better vampire but she's still a vampire, and Rachel was not about to let her go to someone else. It worked out fine once I let them do what they wanted.
well, I'd really ask for Ivy to make me her love slaveLol, get in line. ;) Writing sexually assertive but vulnerable Ivy was insanely fun once I got the balance right. With the blood sharing, I ( ... )
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You should've heard me when I got that "post too large" message. "Argh" was not the four letter word that came to mind.
My muse thanks yours! Funnily enough, at the start I had such a hard time getting the balance on the blood/sex right that at one point I bowed my head over the keyboard and wished that I could borrow your muse for awhile. It's a good thing nobody heard me.
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oh my! my brain is just mush right now...but i do remember telling myself to to tell you to thank your muse and your betas for such a fantastic, wonderful, "insert-another-adjective-for-uber great-here"!
i can't wait for my brain to turn into goo again once we read the epilogue. hahaha!!!
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The epilogue's probably not going to be traditionally mushy, but let's see, shall we? ;)
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