But I like roller coasters - kidding! The ride's almost over and I'm not going to mess anything up too much. I'm not that mean. ;) This feedback made my day btw. Thank you!
First off, great naughty time...I thought for a second they wouldn't go through with it (again), but you sure made up for the earlier aborted attempt
I'm sure I'm going to get flak for this but...they almost didn't. *ducks* Originally the odds were against it because Ivy still had doubts about Rachel. So I kept trying to write a "noble Ivy/let's wait till you're better/sure" scene but in the end I just couldn't see how they could pull back again, not if they meant everything they said in the last chapter. Ivy may be a better vampire but she's still a vampire, and Rachel was not about to let her go to someone else. It worked out fine once I let them do what they wanted.
well, I'd really ask for Ivy to make me her love slave
Lol, get in line. ;) Writing sexually assertive but vulnerable Ivy was insanely fun once I got the balance right. With the blood sharing, I wanted to show what it would be like if Ivy was right.
I also like how unsure Rachel is, how it's not immediatly easy and perfect...I feel for her too
That's my bow to RL. A girl as determinedly straight as Rachel finally admitting that she's fallen for Ivy? At a time when Ivy's about to risk everything? They're bound to have an interesting life.
First off, great naughty time...I thought for a second they wouldn't go through with it (again), but you sure made up for the earlier aborted attempt
I'm sure I'm going to get flak for this but...they almost didn't. *ducks* Originally the odds were against it because Ivy still had doubts about Rachel. So I kept trying to write a "noble Ivy/let's wait till you're better/sure" scene but in the end I just couldn't see how they could pull back again, not if they meant everything they said in the last chapter. Ivy may be a better vampire but she's still a vampire, and Rachel was not about to let her go to someone else. It worked out fine once I let them do what they wanted.
well, I'd really ask for Ivy to make me her love slave
Lol, get in line. ;) Writing sexually assertive but vulnerable Ivy was insanely fun once I got the balance right. With the blood sharing, I wanted to show what it would be like if Ivy was right.
I also like how unsure Rachel is, how it's not immediatly easy and perfect...I feel for her too
That's my bow to RL. A girl as determinedly straight as Rachel finally admitting that she's fallen for Ivy? At a time when Ivy's about to risk everything? They're bound to have an interesting life.
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